goldenchild725

Lv15

I love reading books, particularly the ancient type books with female leads, alchemy and so much more

2018-09-30 入りましたAustralia

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goldenchild7252 years ago
に返信 Michelle_Manisha
You never know what'll happen in the future.
"That's because it's a dark part of history no King wishes to remember. No King wants to remember that all the Kingdoms were run by Queens at some point because the women rebelled. No Kingdom wants another rebellion. The worst part about it is we were taught that men are above women, yet women were once rulers of the Kingdoms. If the Queens didn't just have sons and no daughters, the rule would have remained under the grasp of women." My eyes widened at the thought. A Kingdom run by women. That would be paradise.
I Will Be Queen
ファンタジー · goldenchild725
goldenchild7252 years ago
に返信 Michelle_Manisha
Do it!!!
Seeing all of my brothers still alive was nostalgic. After father walked past them, I curtsey. "Good morning, older brothers. I hope you have all been well this past fortnight." Only eighth brother, third brother and seventh brother glance at me. The rest leave without a backward glance.
I Will Be Queen
ファンタジー · goldenchild725
goldenchild7253 years ago
に返信 ehsoe_yeahhh
I did. The author just asked me to help edit. That's all.
In the kitchen Tom was helping April finish off dinner she had made one vegetable soup, chilli and garlic crawfish, Sichuan pork and a vegetable side dish. They carried everything to the table and she thanked Tom. Tom then left to go ask Martin to come down to eat.
Your Turn to Chase Me, Reborn For Revenge
都市 · xAlexiax
goldenchild7254 years ago
発表
They're short and to the point, yet deep. I really like them. There's not much I can say about it because there are not enough chapters. They're not long enough to have any serious issues with the spelling and grammar.
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goldenchild7254 years ago
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Came and gone? It doesn't sound right... shouldn't it be came and went?
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goldenchild7254 years ago
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I don't read or write poetry. Even in school, I never really understood the subject. I can say this though. Although there are some dark pieces, it's an interesting compilation. It has something for everyone, so just enjoy.
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goldenchild7254 years ago
に返信 calfikydra
Although I couldn't understand why you did it, doesn't mean I didn't like it. As a Christian, it's nice to see someone using the Bible in such a way.
The forbidden fruit
都市 · calfikydra
goldenchild7254 years ago
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Comma after soil.
Rachel gritted her teeth, she stood and then left the study. She went to her bedroom and sat on the bed. She cursed April and her mother Kathleen, they were both so talented and beautiful. She smirked as she thought that in the end didn't she end up with everything while Kathleen lay in the damp, dark soil rotting away.
Your Turn to Chase Me, Reborn For Revenge
都市 · xAlexiax
goldenchild7254 years ago
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Full stop after Kathleen. Get rid of didn't. Comma after everything.
Rachel gritted her teeth, she stood and then left the study. She went to her bedroom and sat on the bed. She cursed April and her mother Kathleen, they were both so talented and beautiful. She smirked as she thought that in the end didn't she end up with everything while Kathleen lay in the damp, dark soil rotting away.
Your Turn to Chase Me, Reborn For Revenge
都市 · xAlexiax
goldenchild7254 years ago
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Question mark after first.
"Enough... why don't you go ahead and shower first." Martin didn't lift his head from his documents as he spoke.
Your Turn to Chase Me, Reborn For Revenge
都市 · xAlexiax

I Will Be Queen

Set in a parallel universe, where the Earth is made up of kingdoms named after the different continents of the world, there lived a young princess in the Kingdom of Australia named Adira. Adira is the only female in her cruel family, the youngest of 10 siblings, and the only child from the king's fifth wife. To gain the throne, one must be the only sibling left alive...if you were male. Females were like chattel, to be sold to create alliances between kingdoms. Having lived her life once already, Adira returns to when she was 10, and this time, she wants to make a change. She will become Queen.

goldenchild725 · ファンタジー

4.8

10 Chs