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Damn!!!!!

well, at least there are chapter updates. Rather, completely stop writing. Maybe a small filler arc like this will give the author a buffer time to improve the overall story and plot. At least, that is what I'm hoping

Basically, this and the previous could be written as one chapter. there is a little bit of story progression but a lot of repetitive explanations. We get that word, and chapter counts are important. But rather than rephrasing and repeating, try to make them chapters more weighty. Mech touch is a great example. Half of the chapter is irrelevant, but reading them won't make us feel like we are bored or wasting coins and time. Of course, take your time writing and come up with more exciting plots . All we fans of this book want is to read it without getting bored and exhausted.

what the heck does counting seconds mean. I can understand what you are trying to imply, but at least keep these simple. At some point, it just hinders the reading experience.

It's definitely way better than a lot of scrap and crap out there on this platform. Starts getting more in-depth and interesting from chapter 400.

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Nope ravenstein's are ones with white hair. Aurora is white haired. Zoey is purple haired. Most probably FL.

None of the ravenstiens can be FL's. They are all cousins.

Well, coming straight to the point, It is the best of the best stories out there. I can't believe this is the author's first novel. Though I feel there are very few overexplanations, they didn't hinder the flow. Excellent!!!!

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Sorry. I'll take my criticism in the above review back. In the very next chapter, I read after the review that there's a time skip. I was being too impatient, and I reflect on this!!!!

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The most sophisticated and systematic sci-fi that ever existed in this platform. Period. Those who are reading Mech touch, this is more detail oriented and systematic than Mech touch. Love this!!!!!!!!

Interesting. Very interesting. Also, thank you very much for not making this into a harem. Now a days harem trope has become too clique. It's good that you have decided not to have it.

Giving 5 stars just because the prologue and summary is interesting. But unfortunately, I feel very uncomfortable reading a first person based story. All the best!!!

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