..shrieked…

Same here. It is rather a good read 👍👍

It would have been a trial read that didn’t make the cut and they yanked it. Now they need books so they are pushing it out again, 2 years later.. been a number of those of late.

Nah, sorry. This isn’t making any sense and really it feels to immature. Good luck but not for me this, to many grammar and spelling issues.

Already stated her origins, don’t need to rehash it.

Head house maid? I assume you must mean the Head Butler. Proofread …..

Chanel? Perfume? Yeh yeh, he meant channel, as in the next sentence.

..let me GO over to her..

Her? Translation issues already

Lose the kingdom…. Why do authors consistently want to have a loose kingdom.. Google it.

I have to store a few chapters to enjoy a good read, reading one chapter a day made the story to jerky I guess, so a 1/2 dozen or so keeps it a little more fluid.

Thanks for the chapters. Caught up again and of course it’s a cliff hanger end. Scamming Mr Hardy? Surely they now have a low life expectancy. Keep,up the good work,👍

I kinda like this one, of course the China is great mentality is rampant through out the story but overall it is an enjoyable read. Only negatives is the cost of locked chapters in privlage. Blatantly a cash grab and should be reprimanded but hey that’s WebNovel whose motto is “we’re here to make money, not friends”

Overall a disappointing read. Standard transmigration novel where the MC arrives in a world based on a Eroge game and of course he is the villain. The story itself was just to long in development, starting at him arriving at 5 years of age, but it dragged on through school years etc. after chapter 41 I threw it in. Initially the MCs (villain) goal was to save the heroines and sub-heroines from bad endings if not selected by the protagonist, think it was 4-5 Heroines and 3 sub-heroines, when out of the blue comes another transmigrator who also knows of this game and they team up splitting the girls between them. Mind you, both transmigrators are still young, oh and the second transmigrator is a girl (but maybe past life a guy, no idea). So 2 young kids are plotting, even discussing murder and later the MC actually incinerated a number of homeless bums. Yeh he prevented a future event happening but in my thoughts if he knew what was to happen then im pretty sure there were other ways to get around this episode. Still it happened and it really was kinda offputting. Anyways, the story was, in my mind, nothing exciting and read almost like a child’s story. I forget that a lot of Japanese novels tend to be rather formal and stiff in their delivery, which didn’t do this any favours. It was simply to childish and failed to deliver something that can capture a readers attention. Tl;dr - Try elsewhere for something more engrossing.

Wedding*

Making so many loose ends here that I think will be left unanswered.

So ending it at high school? Makes no sense as does that mean the harem is established and the lives saved? Would be freaking stupid to end it in that case as the whole premise of this is to change the heroines fate or will it just be a rush job and readers can draw their own conclusions.

Weak MC, but then again in most Japanese Eroge types stories, the MCs are pushovers.

And freaking admit it? Clueless MC, giving away his cards..

Wow, just come out and say it.