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Pavan1234

Pavan1234

Lv5

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2018-04-12 入りましたIndia
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  • Pavan1234
    Pavan123411mth
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    Still my best akame ga kill. A best completed fanfiction on this site

    Noble Life in Akame Ga Kill
    その他 · Felix9713
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  • Pavan1234
    Pavan12341yr
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    Author's best story out of all his books.

    Naruto: Blind Hyuga
    アニメ·コミックス · Hkj
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  • Pavan1234
    Pavan12341yr
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    Still this is my favorite completed fanfiction on this site

    Noble Life in Akame Ga Kill
    その他 · Felix9713
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  • Pavan1234
    Pavan12341yr
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    This is one of reasons why I hate the concept of main characters knowing about future. Main characters become tunnel-visioned & their reasoning losses logical base.

    "How about this." Peter says with a sigh, as he knows that none of them see things his way. "I admit that Banner's power is unpredictable and possibly uncontrollable, but I believe that Hulk can be reasoned with."
    I'm Spider-Man (MCU)
    映画 · AlienWarlord
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  • Pavan1234
    Pavan12342yr
    に返信 Lord_Black

    I read it directly Google translation from chinese websites

    The Legendary Actor
    現実 · Shallowman
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  • Pavan1234
    Pavan12342yr
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    Fast paced ATG Fanfic. Some may not like the Summary like writing style of this fanfic. But to me it feels like a breath of fresh air to read a fast paced fanfiction after so many slow paced novels. Hope author completes this fanfic

    Smart Guy in Against the Gods
    アニメ·コミックス · G_28
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  • Pavan1234
    Pavan12342yr
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    Author finally found the Plot progression direction. 🎉🎉 Last two chapters, and even this chapter, were very bad in my opinion. But I am happy that author found a direction for plot progression.

    Ch 62 Chapter 62
    Mha: Aegis the Shield Hero
    アニメ·コミックス · Asce
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  • Pavan1234
    Pavan12342yr
    に返信 KumoLoversClub

    When Mc enters the sect. Plot in the sect is very clichéd.

    I Have A Martial Arts Panel
    アクション · Vanguard Flaming Pig
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  • Pavan1234
    Pavan12342yr
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    Re-read it once again after 1 Year. Still the best completed fanfiction I have ever read. Mc's characterization, Character interactions, Plot premise and plot progression are excellent. Hope author writes few more fanfics.

    Noble Life in Akame Ga Kill
    その他 · Felix9713
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  • Pavan1234
    Pavan12342yr
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    This fanfic gave me same feel as 'Black Tech Internet Cafe System'. That novel is one of my most favorite Novels. Hope author completes this fanfic.

    MARVEL: GAME MAKER SYSTEM
    映画 · NunuXD
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  • Pavan1234
    Pavan12342yr
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    The most interesting DXD fanfiction I have ever read. Highlights of this fanfic are character interactions & plot progression. Plot premise is good. Mc's characterization is very good. Hope author completes this fanfic.

    Godly crafter in DxD
    アニメ·コミックス · Mangadonf
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  • Pavan1234
    Pavan12342yr
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    Now this is world breaking plot hole.

    "Haha... All I need is half a day to use it again. Really, Hashirama's cells are a work of art." Danzo spoke mockingly.
    Naruto: Child of Chakra [COMPLETE]
    アニメ·コミックス · MisterImmortal
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  • Pavan1234
    Pavan12342yr
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    Starting premise was above average & first 100 chapters are readable. But New Plot points introduced after 100 chapters are not interesting. Wishes plot has with above average execution at the start but after Whitebeard-marine war, it was poorly executed with introduction of Kurama. Mc's Ninja Powers of Naruto world are executed well in the initial part (even if Mc is not OP & author has poor Power levels comparisons be naruto world & one piece world, it didn't bother me that much). But Mc's Power progression after 100 chapters becomes stale. Mc's characterization & Character interactions feels more & more cringy as plot progressed.

    The Shinobi of Straw Hats
    アニメ·コミックス · PeekACoo
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  • Pavan1234
    Pavan12342yr
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    Rarely, I find a very good fast paced fanfiction. This is one of such novel. Highlight of this is 'Plot progression (with Kingdom building elements & fast pace plot)'. Initial Plot premise & Character interactions are very good. Mc's characterization is good. Hope author completes this fanfic.

    An Osmosian in Marvel (MCU Fanfiction)
    アニメ·コミックス · ArifuretaForever
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  • Pavan1234
    Pavan12342yr
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    I think there is a translation mistake here. In chinese, Naruto series is named as Hokage series. During my mtl translation experience, Naruto Character name & Hokage title always gets mixed up.

    "Of course, Naruto is a role model to me," Akabane responded.
    Creating The Manga Of Naruto On Naruto World Become My Ultimate Goal!
    アニメ·コミックス · Levaa
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  • Pavan1234
    Pavan12342yr
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    Hope you complete this 'character growth' arc for Mc quickly & get back main story. Personally, i don't want any Character growth for this Mc, as he was interesting for me as he was before. I read your Black clover fanfiction. Except for starting few chapters, Everything else was very well written. There was no character growth arcs there. Plot progression & Character interactions are enough to keep story interesting. Don't make 'Hero' concept so seriously. 'Hero' is just a Job in the MHA society, just like military soldiers in our society.

    Ch 58 Chapter 58
    Mha: Aegis the Shield Hero
    アニメ·コミックス · Asce
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  • Pavan1234
    Pavan12342yr
    に返信 SufferJustLikeMe

    Mtl novel site.

    I Have A Martial Arts Panel
    アクション · Vanguard Flaming Pig
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  • Pavan1234
    Pavan12342yr
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    First 100 chapters chapters are very good. After 100 chapters, Everything becomes very clichéd & cringy. It's like, first 100 chapters & remaining chapters are written by two different authors.

    I Have A Martial Arts Panel
    アクション · Vanguard Flaming Pig
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  • Pavan1234
    Pavan12342yr
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    Any recommendations on barrier based fanfics among all the fanfics you read

    Mha: Aegis the Shield Hero
    アニメ·コミックス · Asce
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  • Pavan1234
    Pavan12342yr
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    Highlights of this fanfic are Character interactions & Mc's cheat. (Hope author doesn't make Mc's cheat too OP. Would be good if there was a restriction on total number of different cards Mc can mirage with himself. Like Maximum 3 Orange cards & 10 purple cards. Something like this). From what I observed from reading author's previous books, Author's strength lies in writing Character interactions. Even here, they are very good (most likely will reach 'Excellent' level with Teacher-student interactions) Plot premise is very good. Plot progression is good. Mc's characterization is very good. Hope author completes this fanfic.

    The Skillful Lockhart
    書籍·文学 · LargeFarva
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