Koob

I like the story so far but why did you change the weighting style part way? The novel suddenly turned into a script. by script, i mean <Character name: Comment'. i really don't like this style of writing and if it continues. i'll probably drop this novel.

It's crazy how good this fanfiction is. From what i can guess, Edward is going to be playing a roll in the upcoming Marvel movies, probably spiderman. i would like to see a scene of Edward doing "Stephen Sanchez - Until I Found You" with Scarlett Johansson. She's also a singer and so it would fit i believe. It also fits his character do do a song that is new but sounds like it came from the 60's.

Love the story. Its hard to fund such a sweet story on this site. Even the grammar is good. This is one of the few that I would recommend. Keep going and thank you for the chapters.

The story has an interesting plot but the grammar is very bad. my greatest dislike is when females are referred to as males. the 'he' and 'she' are constantly being mixed up. throwing this into something like MS Word would fix most of the grammer issues.