Alex_773H

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One of the most striking things about this work is the lack of what I call "useful filler." I’m not referring to the kind you find in Naruto (God have mercy), but to that layer of interaction and detail that enriches the experience and, in this case, seems to be missing. Although the author succeeds in creating an interesting world, it feels like something extra is missing to make the story more immersive. Comparing it to *Harry Potter*, for example, in the school life at Hogwarts, the teachers have a more active role, and the interactions between them and the students help bring the environment to life. There could be more interactions between secondary characters or more detailed descriptions of the setting, especially when crossing between two worlds. (And I’m talking about the more personal life of the MC, not just the Black House and their interactions with politics.) But I don't know, I'm just giving my opinion. 🤷‍♂️

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