Sorry about this, but there were external factors that took place (related to family members and studies), also, I'm still taking the time to come up with the story this time instead of jumping to the writing immediately while trying for a new style of writing.

Hmm, we'll see, there's reasons why I won't include harem unless it just allows the story to flow much better, while romance can coexist with the harem at the same time (rarely seen, but I've seen them)

Everything in the first volume is only to build up the character's development for the later stages, you can expect the mc to have the strength that he deserves as an mc ltr on.

Thanks for the support, a review and power stones would be greatly appreciated ^^

It's just an 'image' of himself he was showing Ace to motivate him because he expected Ace to be the 'chosen one'

Will take a look at it and see if there's an area of improvements that won't affect the main storyline that's currently ongoing, will add a notice to the latest chapter released improvements are made. I greatly appreciate your support ^^

Thanks for the review and as I have disclosed before, the harem isn't confirmed yet.

Thanks for the support, do expect the next chapter to be released soon :)

Thanks, that's all I needed to know since things might be different from my perspective as a writer. I'll only be releasing another chapter some time later to make adjustments first.

I know this is abrupt, but do you think that it's possible for the plot to develop without changes being made to the storyline in past chapters? (With grammer edited and improved descriptions etc)

And yes, I'll be back, but I'll most probably need some time to reset my mindset first and draw up a good draft this time.

Thank you

That's the case as the identity of the third person isn't known yet

Thanks for pointing it out

The language was good and the story was paced decently and if there's something I must point out, the story just lacks an element to arouse more of my attention.

The story starts fine I guess, though there's that lacking element which just can't keep my interest. Also, grammar can still be improved through it is understandable.

Well, what can I say besides it being a good romance novel? The characters are interesting with a certain characteristic or trait to them. The release rate might be slower compared to those daily releases, but in terms of quality, it's there and worth the wait. After all, quality over quantity.

I would say it's a fine way of writing as some people prefer slower paced novels over fast paced novels. Just a different group of audience in my opinion, but keep up the good work!

Even though I've only just read the first few chapters, I can say confidently that the world development and characters have all been described in detail, not through the use of vocabulary, but imagery writing as well which actually gave me quite the vivid imagination and and good first impression of the novel. As for the plot, I would say it's more slow paced with the events well thought out and reasonable.

The story has a intriguing dark side to it which I have to say aroused my attention, especially with a few elements that pop out in the story though it feels that some situations could have been paced more quickly (Personal thinking)