Leun

First like 50 pages are slow, but you'll definitely get hooked and binge read this novel

im about to finish terra nova online and timeless asassin is still 100+ chapters ToT

im looking for a complete novel to read and saw that you add a comment on your own novel. such dedication. alright, let me read yours!

I just realize something. he lied at least once! when he was using the other identity the first time to fuck the union, he said he cant even kill a chicken.

its a very fast paced story. too fast, making the story developmeny at middle and ending lackluster.

absolutely fantastic story! I am glad that they got the best ending! Nothing to say about the novel! Story is great, character development is great, world background is great!

Some things I have to let others know that no one brought up in the review is the translation. Some Characters is always a 'he' even if it's a she. Have different names/nicknames. the level of gene they are inscribing, their cultivation level and combat power. they are always a jumble. which is stronger? monarch or emperor gene? why king level are described as god level when god level is the highest gene they can get and king level is like lvl 4? why the name of the genes mc used keep changing name? a bit of spoiler from the ending it feels like rushed and they used the novel pocket hunting dimension to save the ending making the ending lackluster. no happy ending even on the mc's harem. also, what the heck, how did Anastasia? anrastasia? arnastasia? anna? (these is how her name got spelled, somewhere along these letters) became part of his harem when she didn't contribute to his growth besides from being charm/succubus/ye mei race.

Love the novel and all. The only thing that made me disappointed is that there is no wiki for the novel to look up to. I love looking at Wiki information on almost all novels I read. It's probably a pain to do it, but just rereading the information about the MC and a quick reminder on who is who and description on what they look like give me a sense of more vivid imagination whole reading. Overall, it's a great novel, and I give it 5 stars! Thank you!

the fact that I saw your comment here means its a good novel. thank you for the hard work!

I read reincarnated with the strongest system couple months ago and I only know it's a great novel. I even forgot who's the author. But after reading this novel and reading that last name "Ainsworth" made me look up who's the author and lo and behold it's the same author of one of my favorite novel. I completely fall in love when they are in the same universe and grandpa James just always popping up being the priest when someone is getting married. Keep up the great work and thank you Elyon for your wonderful world you bring us!