WillMissQ
I’ve read a lot so if I critique your book, just know it’s just tough love and I’m most likely gonna keep on reading... unless your novel is trash and the grammar sucks
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WillMissQ23hに返信 ArifuretaForeverArisha Kartis- WillMissQ1dコメント🚨Insert Devious GIFs/PICs here - Most likes wins🚨(A/N: only TWO entries per person!)
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Let me guess: swimmers build ewwww
I mean I'm not a body builder or anything, but I do think I could give some professional male models a run for their money. - WillMissQ1dコメント
Easiest way to do that is to keep her close, a.k.a. have a relationship with her. Add her to the harem.
Jean Grey aka Marvel Girl. The current host of the Phoenix Force, who I aim to prevent having a Dark Phoenix Saga with everything I have. - WillMissQ1dコメント
CHANGE IT TO META-HUMAN!!!
It's why I'm working to make sure people like Hank get the respect they deserve despite being an X-Rounder. - WillMissQ1dコメントI was a pretty good-looking guy of fifteen, though you couldn't really tell. After all, because I constantly go to the gym to be in shape, my height is 175 centimeters, and weight because of the muscle mass is 82 kilograms. And that's at my age.
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I can’t seem to care for your MC. He’s too edgy and there’s no personality to him other than maximum edge. I can’t come to like him at all. All I could think of was that we should go back to the wonder woman scene because that was something that was actually cool and interesting and we wanted to actually witness. Then there’s your MC and ”oh look another fight he’s in”
Ch 38 Issue #37: X, Clash. - WillMissQ2dコメント
Can you just, not keep sending him into situations one after the other? There’s a thing called pacing and you’re moving wayyy too fast. Have him take a break, escape or whatever, and chill out. Do a mini slice of life or something that allows the story to slow down cause this pacing is atrociously fast. There’s zero rest at all.
Ch 28 Issue #27: X, Fire. - WillMissQ2dに返信 Glorious4EyedKingCh 89 Ryomen Sukuna
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Just gonna ignore the fact that she cut his webbing with a knife?
"Not this time!" I yelled as I shoot a web line at her and pulled her back into the roof. She grunted in pain and quickly got up, drawing a knife and slicing my webbing. - WillMissQ2dコメントCh 100 Chapter 100 Awakening
- WillMissQ2dコメントCh 100 Chapter 100 Awakening
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She did the exact same thing tho
Gwen: I liked you but seeing how you even betrayed the person who made you who are you today. I lost all the love I have for you. - WillMissQ2dコメント
Peter Barker was able to hold up a collapsing building by himself. He’s way stronger than this.
Ever since Peter discovered he had these powers he experimented with them in a random abandoned building and found out a lot of things. He found out he had superhuman strength that allowed him to punch what he believed was about 5X as strong as Mike Tyson. He could run as fast as Usain Bolt with ease and was as flexible as Olympic-level gymnasts. - WillMissQ3dに返信 Riger82_Ch 117 Chapter 117