GianP

wow... the great scheming demon lords... just randomly became a retard. ... if you say so...

mmm I was wandering when the "Chosen of the Abyss" talent is going to play a part in the story. Or when Roy will start acting like a Chosen... For now he is just slaughtering left and right, not really "enacting punishment" or anything similar. I feel that MC may be a bit too much emotionless rather than cruel or determined.

Congratulations for the now full time job as an author are in order then! Good luck with your life then, and I hope you will find the time to polish your stories and have a quality over quantity philosophy (but I can understand that many people prefer the other way) .

So, as promised I'm interested in coming back... did you have the possibility to correct the early mistakes? I'm interested, but otherwise I wwill old off from this novel :)