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Sahs

Sahs

Lv5

fascinated by wuxia stories.

2017-04-22 入りましたIran
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51.4h

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118

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  • Sahs
    Sahs29d
    コメント

    stupid system....

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: Starting 500 Years Late
    altalt
    Counterattack System appeared when I'm already At The Mahayana Realm
    東方 · The Whitest Crow
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  • Sahs
    Sahs2yr
    発表

    well, first of all , the grammar is really bad . sentences are connected horrendously. explanations are half aszed. charachters are stupid with no personality given.

    altalt
    Unknowingly Cultivate a Experimental Cultivation technique
    ファンタジー · patrick_john_yu
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  • Sahs
    Sahs3yr
    に返信 LollipoPReapeR

    yea. exactly. the author, also contradicted himself in those sheet talks about source type feys too. we still dont know why ppl need feys if they can cultivate.

    Ch 147 Quality Upgrade
    altalt
    Fey Evolution Merchant
    東方 · Amber Button
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  • Sahs
    Sahs3yr
    に返信 SinfuLeeCerebral

    tell me about it, i wanna drop this one, i think it has no more interesting things to say anymore.

    Ch 147 Quality Upgrade
    altalt
    Fey Evolution Merchant
    東方 · Amber Button
    detail
  • Sahs
    Sahs3yr
    コメント

    author is a master sheet talker

    Ch 147 Quality Upgrade
    altalt
    Fey Evolution Merchant
    東方 · Amber Button
    detail
  • Sahs
    Sahs3yr
    に返信 Officially_Undead

    yea, exactly. most stories lose steam around 30 to 40 chapters

    Ch 138 Cat Transformation
    altalt
    Fey Evolution Merchant
    東方 · Amber Button
    detail
  • Sahs
    Sahs3yr
    コメント

    how useless can these chapters become

    Ch 138 Cat Transformation
    altalt
    Fey Evolution Merchant
    東方 · Amber Button
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  • Sahs
    Sahs3yr
    コメント

    useless stuff explained

    Ch 115 Scale Powder Halo
    altalt
    Fey Evolution Merchant
    東方 · Amber Button
    detail
  • Sahs
    Sahs3yr
    コメント

    wtf, the story has gotten too muddled with different characters and high fantasy stuff that i cant get the same feeling from this , as it was from the first 50 chapters.

    Ch 93 The Result is Evident
    altalt
    Fey Evolution Merchant
    東方 · Amber Button
    detail
  • Sahs
    Sahs3yr
    に返信 Perverted_clock_23

    nice Is it yours? If it is, nice work, and keep going, make a novel or short story like that.

    altalt
    Everybody is Kung Fu Fighting, While I Started a Farm
    東方 · Oof
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  • Sahs
    Sahs3yr
    コメント

    not a good chapter. it seems you have lost your mojo. nothing happened in these chapters. it is just filler. also the MC has no good characteristics. he thinks he is the best, he is a loner, but non is true. also why does not he work with the system more?

    Ch 81 I Just Don’t Like It
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    Into the Zombie World
    都市 · Neil_Ads
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  • Sahs
    Sahs3yr
    発表

    the worst story that i have read so far. not just the translation, but the storyline and world building is very poorly done. the grammar needs a lot of work.

    altalt
    Monster Integration
    ファンタジー · AnWan
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