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Overall, the storyline is very good with how it blended with the Narutoverse. The writing and grammar are very smooth. The only problem for me is that he was too overpowered, and everyone is unmatchhed to him till the end. I think author could have created a villain as well that balanced his OPmess. I was thinking he could have been the final boss instead of kaguya, with all the villages trying to fight him. He said it himself ghat even if everyone try to kill him, he can beat everyone. Another think I like is that, it has no cliche- no magical moments when someone saves a person in a brink of time. It shows the realism of war in a way. I enjoyed it till the end, it was a fun read. Thank you author.

…Then, boom! They were ripped appart by waiting crocs and mutated beast. They thought they could out swim hundreds of crocodiles, but they were met with demise. Even the croc was were mouth agape from their sheer stupidity. The end… (Kidding thanks for the chapter!)

Hello Guys! This is my first time writing a novel! To be honest with you, I don't have any experience with writing. I currently work as Sales Manager, so grammar and composition is really not my forte. I am not expecting anything from the readers, I write for the sake of transferring my imaginations in to text. Also, I just figured that writing helps me not go crazy. Also, although it takes time, writing is quite fun. Having no expectations, it helps me write whatever is in my mind. The world is free and I can do whatever I want. So even with this trial run, I can already say that it is a success. For those in the future reading this book, I am forever thankful. I also want to encourage you to write your own book. Create your own story and create your own adventure! It doesn't need to be perfect but as long as you enjoy what you are writing.

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