Review Detail of OneHeart in Naruto: Dream to Immortality (COMPLETED)

Overall, the storyline is very good with how it blended with the Narutoverse. The writing and grammar are very smooth. The only problem for me is that he was too overpowered, and everyone is unmatchhed to him till the end. I think author could have created a villain as well that balanced his OPmess. I was thinking he could have been the final boss instead of kaguya, with all the villages trying to fight him. He said it himself ghat even if everyone try to kill him, he can beat everyone. Another think I like is that, it has no cliche- no magical moments when someone saves a person in a brink of time. It shows the realism of war in a way. I enjoyed it till the end, it was a fun read. Thank you author.