NinetyThreeDegrees

She*Get the right pronouns

more ch plz

The novel keeps propping up this Ryu guy but doesn't give him any push back. The scene im reading right now is boring. Tge part where Elena keeps praising Ryu to high heaven is a classic mistake that some author make in writing. Its show not tell. If you keep telling people about his achievments instead of showing them it makes the story infinitly more boring.

Will there be a time where you'll have someone help edit your chapters? I just got into the story but it's hard to continue reading Grammer is a big thing for me.

figuratively speaking

I agree need to use his because the dragon is male if you use her that would indicate the dragon is female which it is not.

He ate em !!!!!!!

I think its taking a while because they're building up chapters.

pick up its good

its been upgraded to rage