Witcher at Hogwarts

I'm honestly enjoying the story currently please don't drop.

A good novel so far, hope that it maintains its quality.

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I didn't think that this would become a nuisance, but try reading all of them, and you get the choppy perception. That special garbage sewage, liquid-like feeling when trying to understand a story that is built like an empty box.

The premise is a lot of fun, the mixture of world power systems is great, but the way MC doesn't really matter in the world. He creates at least as many problems as he solves and his solutions are... Questionable to say the very least for someone who's had to deal with racism as a Witcher. His attitude and straightforward approach to problems that should be handled with tact an caution are contrasted by his honestly idiotic and roundabout approach to problems that should be toppled head on... It's like his character is designed to cause the maximum amount of chaos for every action he takes. Beyond the issues with the MC himself, the wordpadding are a bit much. There is literally a chapter where it takes 3-5 paragraphs for irrelevant person A to hand moderately relevant person B a scabbard.

1/4/2/2/3 please rewrite the whole novel and stop relying on A.I so much the story idea has potential but it is ruined by using the A.I so much it would be best if you only take ideas from A.I on how to keep going not on what to write, how or when

Story progession is pretty meh . Character interaction seems a bit rushed. Overall interesting concept with a mid execution.

The witcher premise is unique and can seamlessly fit into the HP world. I recommend this if your tired of stories having MCs with power systems that don't fit the world..

this is a good fanfic fun for pass time but how the hell hermione develops a crush on MC that is so stupid I ,failed to process it.(and mc has three other girlfriends)

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Finally a Witcher fanfic. I just finished blood and wine dlc last month

So far, so good. I hope it will continue that way.

a great fanfic, and a great take on a witcher in the wizarding world

It's a very interesting story, I just hope the main character doesn't develop a physique similar to Vesemir after becoming very comfortable with magic. (Google tranlate)

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Nice one ,it would be better if writer make him appear 2/3 year earlier from the plot so that he can easily learn everything before or during the resurrection of voldmore. Good story just don't ruin it.

dropped chapter 62, it was awsome for the most part until their then turned to shit. mc is teachercyet talks to golden trio as if a student, mc knows plot etc yet doesn't change it after saying he needs to do something to change it. says he has to do something then goes does dozen other things before remembering it only because something caused something to go wrong if mc had done said thing it wouldn't happen in first place.bunch of other issues with the novel

It's very lacking in consistency of the plot and some points require you to turn off parts of your brain to read through, most characters are very oversimplified and it's very sad to see a useful plot point be dismissed right after being used only once, or some blatant mistakes in some characteristics of magic. it's a story worthy of read if you're looking for a pastime, but a bit on the lower end of the quality spectrum for me.

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