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I really don't have many wishes, even though I felt my death coming, even though I caused my own death, even though it's all over. Dying is not something I am afraid of. When I woke up, I discovered that I am now in an empty white room and behind me a black button standing out on the white wall. And with that button I can ask for multiple wishes and having the ability to have anything for the first time I felt the longing to ask for all those wishes that I have ignored. --- Honkai Star Rail- Fanfic

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Sparkle's delusion (Part 1)

This day, at night

We are the in bed trying to sleep.

Sparkle stopped talking to me when I told her I was a character in the game. I can't do anything to change this. 

if i had took her a lie, maybe she wouldn't be like this. This is my fault

"ugh"

With surprice in my eyes i look at Sparkle, since she got on top of me. I feeling nervous at our compromising posicion. Moving my hands to her legs, without noticing.

"Je~" 

I can not see her eyes, but i know she is seeing me.

" What are you doing?"

"You want this, you don't need to answer or ask me" She move her hip, touching our parts.

My cheeks blushes, but i can't... i'm so romantic besides i feel this strange.

Trying to stop her moves, but she take my arms with streght prevent my actions.

"No, no..." she murmurs. 

"What happens?"

"nothing, im doing my work, a character of a game. You can play to me, use me"

"Yes, you can tell me anything and i just have to obey you"

Her words shock me. it's true that she is a game character, but know she is in from of me, she's real. I can toch her body, she have feelings, have thinks and can opnion... and other thinks like a live and real creatures.

"You are real" i told her clearly.

"..." She don't asnwer me, but i can imagine her shock face.

"Do you want to feel real? Do you want me i provet to show you are real?" Touching her legs and later toching her waist, Into her shirt i up my hands, more and more...

And she stops me.

"I- i understand..." She stuttered

"No, you need a lesson so you lern to behave" bravely, i take by her neck and im short our distance. With tha intection to kiss her lips, but my brave isn't enoght.

I want kiss her but i doubt.

Shut up fuck up, i want to kiss her.

I forget my thinks and i kiss her lips, she does not show displeasure, her tense body relaxes.

Surprinsingly, she took advantage of me and she kiss me with too much intensity. I feell her tongue trying to into my mouth.

"At the end, you want to do pervert thing with me"

"i can't deny that, but i want a real Sparkle not a pupet"

"Tch, go to sleep Romeo"

Finally, i can sleep. With her on top of me.

Somehow the story has to continue. I already have several chapters in mind before the integration of a new character.

Also, I think I liked the idea that he will be affected by the fact that he is a persaon of a game. I think I could do better if it was written in a different way and I wasn't using this fanfic to practice English.

Besides, with this chapter it would be 5 weeks... since I have started to study English.

Personal opinion, at the beginning I started super motivated but at the same time I think I didn't have all the tools to study. That slowed down my progress and I spent about 30 minutes at the beginning but now I spend a whole hour on it.

Time that at the beginning is tiring but in the meantime I see more advantages in learning the language and I enjoy it more and more.

(This is written with translator, it's a lot of thoughts)

I think you will also tell me your opinion, what do you think? have I improved from the first chapter to here?

(Pd I still have a lot of topics to cover since in topics covered so far I think I have only completed or almost completed A1, this week hopefully I can start A2).

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