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We Can Trek It

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What is We Can Trek It

WebNovel で公開されている、FaebyenTheFairy の作者が書いた We Can Trek It の小説を読んでください。[Your only goal is to safely escort the three children across the desert. Achieve it however you can. So as to not get lost, follow the compass.]________________________________________________This no...

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[Your only goal is to safely escort the three children across the desert. Achieve it however you can. So as to not get lost, follow the compass.] ________________________________________________ This novel is my submission for the writing prompt contest 57. I'm happy to say that I came up with something that can fit all eight keywords! Please enjoy and check out my other novel, Planet Dragunity~ Follow my Twitter for (sparse) updates @faebyen ________________________________________________ Many thanks to Alex0224 for making the cover and whoever is the rightful owner of the images used! ________________________________________________ I have since decided to put off working on this novel. There will be no more updates (for a while).

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MizA · ファンタジー
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Over my doorstep

The first three paragraphs after this one are just me ranting about my personal issues so if you don't want to read that just skip to the 4th. This story started out as a sort of Outlet for my disappointment over a novel I started reading. I liked it at first, but it just went downhill extremely fast and I was so disappointed that I had to try to make it something I actually would want to read more of. This is a spontaneous project and I have no intention of uploading with any sort of consistency. I'm trying to give a different spin on the isekai setting because I love it to death and I'm pretty disappointed that people often just make a generic isekai and call it a day after writing a few 100 pages of interesting seeming but actually boring content. My English is not perfect yet, but I try to make it as understandable as possible. I am also dyslexic so please cut me some slack. But I always appreciate help with mistakes I made so don't hold back if you find any. I am also borrowing many names and principles from the legendary ‘Supreme Magus’ which is the best story ever written in my opinion. Definitely check it out. The story is about a boy who practically gets abandoned by the world and after even the last important thing to him gets lost he gets a chance to actually change his life. with a little help from his grandfather, he gets to leave everything behind and start again. No one knows for certain if his past won't catch up to him or if he will be able to completely separate from his old world. He meets a lot of people he would wish he hadn't met but also a lot of people he is actually thankful for finding. From aristocrats to orphans, normal people and some shady figures. I think there was a God or two in there somewhere but who knows. he's going to have to fight through a lot of stuff until he actually starts to recover from his trauma and can choose how his own ending will pan out. A Rewrite of this story will be published on Royal Road under the name: A World beyond the Threshold

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DizzyElizzy
DizzyElizzyLv2DizzyElizzy

Very nice story so far, I loved of how the characters interacted with each other, and it seems very lighthearted and fun. Great job on the story so far, and I hope for more updates in the future.

JulianRoniger
JulianRonigerLv2JulianRoniger

Love the conflict, can't wait to read what that raging guy is going to do next. Similar to the first chapter of your book, I sometimes had the feeling of you wanting to explain stuff rather than showing it with actions. Maby that's the style that will make you sucessfull, however, I think it feels kinda strange sometimes. Also, I think in the beginning there is a "long" time of storytelling without a mayor conflict - maby no problem for people that read a lot, for generation instagram with an attention span of a few seconds I think it could be a reason to stop reading before even coming to the interesting parts, though. But, definetly keep on writing these nice sayings or whatever you want to call them, like the black hole in the stomach or that thing with the rule of gravity, these little things make the not - so - exciting parts fun to read. Waiting for the next chapter... (:

Xyerose
XyeroseLv4Xyerose

Although I'v only read one chapter, I believe this story should be more popular! Just by reading this, I can tell the author put a lot of time and effort into their work. And not to mention, I'm really enjoying the story so far. There are many characters introduced in the first chapter, and I got a feel for all of their personalities quite easily! I can't say much about the world background as it's only the first chapter, but I hope you guys will give this story a try. ^_^

tinni_15
tinni_15Lv4tinni_15

Interesting book covers up all the points. Must give it a chance. I like the first chapter, full of all the aspects I like. I rate it 5 Hope the future chapters will be interesting tooooooo

90751052
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Interesting start for the writing contest! The way the characters interacted made them feel real. I'm looking forward to seeing more and how you will integrate all parts of the prompt! There aren't any errors per se in grammar, but there are tons of awkward sentences and run-ons that could be split to sound better. Make sure to add a cover someday! Keep it up author! >3</

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