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Over my doorstep

作者: Slip_Up
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The first three paragraphs after this one are just me ranting about my personal issues so if you don't want to read that just skip to the 4th. This story started out as a sort of Outlet for my disappointment over a novel I started reading. I liked it at first, but it just went downhill extremely fast and I was so disappointed that I had to try to make it something I actually would want to read more of. This is a spontaneous project and I have no intention of uploading with any sort of consistency. I'm trying to give a different spin on the isekai setting because I love it to death and I'm pretty disappointed that people often just make a generic isekai and call it a day after writing a few 100 pages of interesting seeming but actually boring content. My English is not perfect yet, but I try to make it as understandable as possible. I am also dyslexic so please cut me some slack. But I always appreciate help with mistakes I made so don't hold back if you find any. I am also borrowing many names and principles from the legendary ‘Supreme Magus’ which is the best story ever written in my opinion. Definitely check it out. The story is about a boy who practically gets abandoned by the world and after even the last important thing to him gets lost he gets a chance to actually change his life. with a little help from his grandfather, he gets to leave everything behind and start again. No one knows for certain if his past won't catch up to him or if he will be able to completely separate from his old world. He meets a lot of people he would wish he hadn't met but also a lot of people he is actually thankful for finding. From aristocrats to orphans, normal people and some shady figures. I think there was a God or two in there somewhere but who knows. he's going to have to fight through a lot of stuff until he actually starts to recover from his trauma and can choose how his own ending will pan out. A Rewrite of this story will be published on Royal Road under the name: A World beyond the Threshold

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