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Walking with Celestials

作者: Slow_Neptune
Fantasy
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What is Walking with Celestials

WebNovel で公開されている、Slow_Neptune の作者が書いた Walking with Celestials の小説を読んでください。Hirow, a boy fascinated with the stars, dreams of the world outside his small village. His inquisitive nature leads him to befriend an old man who believes light is evil and find a girl who has falle...

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Hirow, a boy fascinated with the stars, dreams of the world outside his small village. His inquisitive nature leads him to befriend an old man who believes light is evil and find a girl who has fallen from the stars. Laniakea, a woman in the far north fights for survival as she escapes her past. Finding a new purpose she seeks those who have taken on the curses of this world. Calder, a prince from a kingdom far to the east, is exiled by his father and seeks to reclaim the throne. Yet his search for truth and revenge in this mad world leads him down unexpected pathways. As the fate of Hirow, Laniakea, and Calder converge, the mysteries of their world are brought forth. This story will also be posted to royalroad.com

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The last bastions of humanity were the last places where society was still thriving, laws still upheld, currencies still being used. The most celebrated one was in the North and there have been many waiting for ages to get in. It was such that the line into the Northern Base spanned miles into the horizon. Skyler was just one of the few who was part of that very line. After her journey with The Airheads, betrayal from other humans and nearly becoming zombie food, she was ecstatic that all she had to do now was wait until she got to the front of the line. Unfortunately for her, getting to the front of the line was the start of all her worries. ~•~ Preview A deep, alluring voice broke the stifled silence,"Hello Ms.?" "Sinclair, Skyler Sinclair," Damn, she’s always wanted to do that! Seeing enough people trying to cooly say their name that way always made her want to, but she was always too embarrassed at the thought to do so. Now though, it's the Apocalypse, things like pride are like what paper money is, useless, and those greedy enough to keep it die not so happy deaths. His voice penetrated the air and lingered in the way Skyler was sure only villains in movies and shows could make it do so, "Ms. Sinclair," He sent her a completely baleful stare as if it was her fault their machine wasn't working. She’s innocent buddy! All she did was walk under the thing and let it scan her. "We would like to request you stay in the Northern Base until the tests are done." Now, she didn’t know about you guys but that did not sound like he was asking. Alright, Mr. Villain, let's see how you negotiate with her. "And how long will that take?" "Five months" Skyler felt saliva go down the wrong hole as she nearly hacked out her lungs. ~•~ This is an original story, so all rights reserved. BTW the cover is something I made by using royalty free icons.

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OrbitAround
OrbitAroundLv12OrbitAround

Good premise, with some unique execution, I hope the author would grow as the story keep going on. The settings was unique and new to me, it make me curious about where this story taking place. And with kingdom in it, I hope to read more. Nice work author!

rydertheking
ryderthekingLv11rydertheking

a great start to a promising fantasy novel. i hope the author continues to release more chapters for the novel because it really has the potential to huge. keep working hard!

ashk29
ashk29Lv4ashk29

Reading this book has been a delightful experience so far. The vivid imagery and symbolism used throughout the book have added another layer to the story's depth, making it a joy to read. I would like to tell author to update the chapters frequently. Overall, I highly recommend this book to anyone looking for a well-written, absorbing story.

ThePression
ThePressionLv2ThePression

Really liked the story, the writing style and word choices are really interesting.

ManwX
ManwXLv2ManwX

First I would start with Writing Quality (5 stars) It's honestly good. Expressive and I hardly saw any grammar errors. Stability of Updates (5 stars) It's okay as well. Looking forward to more. Story development (4 stars) The story has a good flow and I like the way the author transitions to different characters' povs. Character design (4 stars) It's a bit early to give a say if the characters are good. its only 8 chapters as of writing this review but from what I've read this story has potential so I'm looking forward to it. World Background (5 stars) Author I love the way you set up the details that go into the world. It reminds me of my story. Good details. The world is forever changing not dependent on the mc for the changes. I love that aspect. Overall verdict great series that has potential with a sense of mystery of the past present and future. keep it up. [img=recommend]

Alexialasthope
AlexialasthopeLv3Alexialasthope

I like this so far. I like the details of the world very much. I like the main character and the old man. I like for once that the power of light isn't actually a good thing.

OtakuGamerGirlTA
OtakuGamerGirlTALv3OtakuGamerGirlTA

I really love the way the author writes. It's poetic and descriptive, allowing for vivid imagery. I can imagine the characters really speaking as described and it keeps me engaged in the plot. Minor grammar issues here and there, but nothing editing couldn't fix in the future. Great work!

Trinit33
Trinit33Lv2Trinit33

Loved the way the words painted a picture in my mind and it's an amazing book.

xJavierMex
xJavierMexLv3xJavierMex

This was written extremely well. The author excels at the little details that adds realism to scenes. Some of the dialogue can use a few touches, but overall it was enjoyable. I will definitely come back to binge read once more chapters are released.

BS_Entertainment
BS_EntertainmentLv13BS_Entertainment

Great premise with a good amount of world building that just pulls you in and left needing more. I have added this to my library as I'm excited to see where this story goes further down the line!

Fauxflux
FauxfluxLv10Fauxflux

A very interesting concept, the author has conveys the humanity of characters very well, the conversations between characters is very realistic. I look forward to seeing what happens next.

M_Ni
M_NiLv2M_Ni

I really enjoyed the beautiful way you write! The characters are complex and I enjoyed the manner in which you managed to portray their emotions. The world building is gorgeous, and I am looking forward to reading more from this story in the future!

Rishabh_sharma_RIS
Rishabh_sharma_RISLv2Rishabh_sharma_RIS

Amazing poems and the way you write is fantastic ☺️ you have a great potential

Rainandstorm
RainandstormLv2Rainandstorm

Am looking forward to keep on reading this... I really do love the characters as well as the way they communicate as well, so realistic ... The author really did a great job with the writing as well... Do keep on updating author

Paul_Okito
Paul_OkitoLv3Paul_Okito

Good story, love the word building, hardly saw any grammatical errors. But, I would have love to have a clear picture of the world settings in the first 3 chapters. This might tend to reduce the readers attention. I would definitely read more to grasp the content of your book. Nice work author

HouseOfLee
HouseOfLeeLv13HouseOfLee

Very unique story, I enjoyed reading this, good way of starting the novel, very decent paced as well!

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