W.S : The Hybrid

I just recently bumped and read this story and I say this is kind of underrated with bigger potential. Well written and deserve to get a full five star! If you are looking for a story with romantic and magical vibes, don't hesitate and start reading this now. I like this story hope that the author won't just drop it like the others. The more I read it, the more I want to finish it. Hope the author constantly update its chapter. ❤️

I rarely read books of these genre, but, there are a few books of this genre which caught my attention and yours is included as well !! Everything seems okay for me !!! Readable and understandable !! Just one thing that bothered me was the repetition of the same sentences and the feelings or words in the POV's... I hope you could change it a little... Nevertheless, it is a good read and I have added in my library !! Will continue reading it... Keep up writing, author !! You write well :) :) :) <3

Interesting Book. Well done Author The novel has a good plot and is promising. I love the pacing of the novel and the way writer writes the story. The writer is successful in appealing to the readers . At last the novel is overall nice and will desperately wait for the next chapters to release And hope that the writer will continue this awesome work and will evolve even more with time . Mine best wishes are always with you .[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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What's wrong with you PEOPLE/READERS??? Author already published so many chapters, has so many views, but not many reviews??? The book is good, the plot is interesting, characters also - so don't be afraid to leave a comment or review!!! There are things that should be corrected... but we all here to learn and improve our skills. I hope the 5 stars will help... I don't like people with hash comment. I usually ask them if they already successfuly published a novel, or a few tales... so I encourage them to start writing themselves, then they will have the right to... very strict grades or give hints that have nothing to do with the text under evaluation.

Hello, Author! So, I like the premise of the story and the beginning of the chapters are so intriguing that made me gasp unknowingly haha, I can feel the pain that was felt by the MC, which is a plus point. Overall, this novel is great! Keep up the good work author!

Great story line 👏 and plot. Im interested to see how you continue this story. Please keep updating and the great work.. 😇 I think you have a nice story here.

This is a good plot! The premise of the story is amazing. The characters are well-developed. The story is readable and easy to understand All in all definitely a good read!

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Good story idea. But for me I don't fancy the idea of the mc narrating the story. I believe everything is alright for the mc to narrate it. It won't put us in suspense. Kinda like the idea of your book. Good to read. But how the hell the they get a mate. I don't kind of understand

You have an interesting idea! There are a lot of stories about vampires so try to be original, try to create something different,... For the momement you are doing good job! There are things I would change, for example: characters - make them more expressive. Before starting new chapter make a detailed plan of events and how the characters will react in specific situations,... (this seems to be haughty in some places). I hope you will bear with the importance of the difficult (vampire, etc.) topic ;) I wish all the best with that!

The male caracter has to many swing mods, first he didn't want her at the ball then he sleep with her then he goes to another woman and dont want her again, then she died and surprise! He wants her! Promise to treat her better and wants another chance blabla and then! When she is back? Did he treat her good? Did he apologice? Nop, he treats her bad again got her piss and then oh! Be carefull dont drink my Blood you are gonna hurt youself!! What the hell?? He is a good for nothing and a trash of a male caracter.

This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. It feels like heaven to read, I wanna read it so much. If this novel got some drive, then thanked God its still alive. This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. I need this novel like it's quite all right. I need this novel to warm my lonely nights. Just read this novel, cause I... say... Shameless Promotion: Check out my novel: GOBLINS ahahah ! https://***.webnovel.com/book/goblins_19085169206344405

The plot is nice and the author did a great job in creating and presenting their plot. One thing I would like to mention is the first chapter you wrote I guess you shouldn't mention what will happen to the character or how they'll die like as you said that the female lead will end up being one of the werewolves so, I guess let readers be in dilemma about what will happen to her at the end that will make readers more curious. But we'll I'm just a reviewer it's upon it's your story so if you think that this is perfect then it is I'm just an adviser. All the best for future you're doing a nice job :)

This hybrid story is absolutely enchanting! I'm not writing this review because the genre of the story is my one of my favourite genres, but this book has absolutely blown my mind! The premise of the story is amazing. The plot is well maintained and the characters are well-developed. They're all loveable. Keep up the good work Author! Add it to my library already!

I like the story very much. Most character portrayed really well. Good way to pass ones time. Need more chapter.🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Hi! It's an intriguing story and good character development. It's one of the genres, I love to read. Keep on writing Author and Fighting! :)[img=coins]

The stroy starts pretty well and it's intresting. You get a good picture of the background which I consider really nice as to not having any questions in the story. Sometimes is not needed but I like it here. The writing is also good. Good job!

Oooookaaay, the first chapter escalated quickly by the end. Im thrilled reading this perhaps excited on what makes your story unique than others, and although I do not read much of si-fi romance, the writing style and technique is new to me. But hey, it piqued my interest somehow! good job author!

This story is nice, people! A wonderfully written story, love how writer explore with the description! This story is an attention-grabber. Really worth for reading, and I'm already one of it! 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻