Aislinn_Jasper

Thank you for reading!!

The story plot seemed interesting, but I am very confused about who Liana is. The first chapter where she is introduced leave me in a great confusion, I had to read the description paragraphs thrice to understand the family tree. So, as a reader, it put me off a little bit. Also, your synopsis is good, but there is a minor mistake, you may correct it and it will be improved. Other than that, your writing style is very nice and comfortable for all the readers, and the story is escalating in a friendly manner. All the best with future updates, I hope this review helps!!

The story is a good start with humour and all. I like the narration, its fun and is capable of keeping readers (me) hooked for some reasons. The descriptions are also to the point not very lengthy or unnecessary. The plot is also engaging and over and all its a good read. Recommended to all the folks out there! ^^ All the best with your further updates Author! <3

You'll do great, don't worry. All the best with your work!!

A good read!! The story is escalating in a nice pace and the story build up is good. I have first three chapters and I like the writing style of the writer. No heavy words, and still explained the situations and actions easily. Nice work, its just the writer needs to work on her punctuation and need to be careful not to swap tense. Else the story is going fine and has a potential.

Nice humor, author! 🤣🤣

Thanks For the Correction

Thanks For the review! ^^

Thanks for the review Rayyyy! <3

Thanks 🥰🥰