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Unlimited Harem Works

作者: Kokushibou
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What is Unlimited Harem Works

WebNovel で公開されている、Kokushibou の作者が書いた Unlimited Harem Works の小説を読んでください。Died.Meet God. Get's Wishes. Get's OP.Flexis His Power.Get's Harem.Flexis His Power More.The End.You want some deep character development? Then why even look here, just look at the title. If you want ...

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Died.Meet God. Get's Wishes. Get's OP.Flexis His Power.Get's Harem.Flexis His Power More.The End. You want some deep character development? Then why even look here, just look at the title. If you want a good story, read Vegabond,Berserk,Kingdom or something like that. Not some shitty fanfic that's cleary going to include a harem. Im writing this, because im bored. English is not my first language. This is my first fanfic, so don't expect much. I could randomly drop it. Btw thumbnail is not mine, if you want me to take it down just message me.

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Kokushibou
Kokushibou作者Kokushibou

Just read the sypnosis and my Auxiliary chapter, if you are ok with stuff like this then. Good? If not then i honestly don't know what you are still doing here. Besides these things im open for criticism and ideas. By the way when someone gives me a 1 star review but only writes "TRASH" or something like that, then im gonna delete these because i don't need these reviews. They are annoying, nothing more nothing less.

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Fantastic_SpiritLv14Fantastic_Spirit

Honestly I dont know where to help you here. Usually people forget to put capitals and periods but not you. About the dialogue, the longer you write the more you figure out how to write better. Its sort of an experience thing. Well anyway this is just encouragement. Even if I havent read the story just for the 1st chapter 5 Stars . I completely agree with those statements btw.

NamelessPersona
NamelessPersonaLv3NamelessPersona

You use i a lot and every time it needs to be capitalized to I. The other big thing I would suggest is that the verbs need to be put in the past tense. Most English readers are used to past tense and it feels more natural for them. Present tense is possible but it usually dictates a commanding grasp of the English language. Just making those two changes will improve these chapters immensely. whenever i stands alone it needs to be capitalized

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