Ultimate Fruit

Spoiler chapter 1 : Mc tells he is from another world. So I just want people not to expect too much on this. He is fanboy so it's obvious that he likes to become a follower of luffy. Just your average nerd otaku. Author should know lot of people hate it when mc tells other people that he is from other world

It's good to read but my only problem is the mc.. It makes me really annoyed. Author keeps making mc mentions that he is from another world that it turns off people from continuing this. And it's funny that this mc keeps using his power then faint. Giving him power is really just a waste he is more suited on becoming a messenger or just a civilian.

it's so boring the drama is so disgusting that I couldn't even read it. Man tried very hard to finish it off the main character doesn't even take advantage of his fruit that heals him every time he's tired to train his body and says that I hate training his body, in a world where physical strength is almost everything and having an advantage like that does not train him is so stupid that bored their relationships came out of nowhere that it was that out of nowhere falls in love nami after that goes Robin then you add I lived after Kalifa falls in love and you leave her lying because you don't want to do more than 5 women, it's stupid man that you would feel if you fell in love with someone but then take it aside because you like someone more so disgusting for that, don't make him fall in love with the main character

TRRRAAASSSSHHHHHHHH.....MC FUCKING TRASHHHHHH.HIS FUCKING USLESSSSSSSS A FUCKING STUPID MC JUST LIKE THE FUCKING AUTHOR.DDDDDDDDDHJKSAHHFOUHEWUHASDJHFJK

the story is about the mc who found himself in one piece, so the mc as a super fanboy of Luffy and his crew decide to help Luffy. ( note: Luffy don't know what is the meaning of a pirate, he think of it as a game) well, usually every fanfiction is writing because of the author like how the fiction world is, or because the beauties, or the powers inside this world, and it is rare to see mc willing to be the side character like this novel, as everyone knows the moment the mc moved to this world normally he must seek his goal coz he is not watching the show anymore but a real world, but the mc of this novel did not awaken from his otaku mode and set a goal to help some random guys in this world that have no relationship with him, yes I know he loved Luffy but that is not a reason to set aside your life and be his babysitter. as for him revealing his secrets to the straw hats, (let's not mention that Luffy is just like a child that he can't keep secrets at all ), only if the author is not writing this fanfic for readers but to pass time than I think he must not let his mc open his moth every time because all readers prefer a calm and cautious mc, as I can see the straw hats have no right to question his origin, (let's not mention that he look like a little kid that want talk about himself). I read it to 90 chapters not because I like it but because I wanted to see the mc wake up and part ways with the straw hats, but what did he do? he became the cupid of love for Luffy and boa and Zoro and his girl than telling them they are manga characters created by oda, sigh and that's the moment I know it hopeless i have no right to tell the author on how to write his novel so good luck

If u cnt beat beat thenm(marine) ,joint them, typical coward mc. Ultimate fruit my ass , thas bs.

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Author = Luffy's FANBOY the mc is retard thats the only thing future readers to know. this fanfic sux author luffy's fanboy this fanfic sux author luffy's fanboy this fanfic sux author luffy's fanboy this fanfic sux author luffy's fanboy this fanfic sux author luffy's fanboy this fanfic sux author luffy's fanboy this fanfic sux author luffy's fanboy this fanfic sux author luffy's fanboy this fanfic sux author luffy's fanboy this fanfic sux author luffy's fanboy this fanfic sux author luffy's fanboy this fanfic sux author luffy's fanboy this fanfic sux author luffy's fanboythis fanfic sux author luffy's fanboy

Bro your story is very good, please don't drop it, it has so much potential. I will always deposit my stones in your story...............................................................................................

First few chapter are good even though theres some annoying stuff that happening its still good. Although he join the strawhat crew mc still feels like an mc not just a support or a pov of a side character in luff’s crew. But as the chapters progress theres bullsh*t every where. Real life logic are ignore, but its still ok cuz he can make his own logic in a superpower world. Its ok if you make your own logic of how the world works but ignoring your own created logic is a load of crap. You introduce a new logic and ignores it in a few chapters. Introduce a mc’s power but forget how it works in a few chapters. Make mc’s personality like this but change it in a few chapters. And in recent chapters author is forcing the plot to continue(although with change, but still a bit to force) Also author is nerfing mc little by little, or more like restricting him and not doing some smart move to make the fight longer. And the Lucius guy plot is bull. Cliche stuff. I really love this novel until water 7 arc. A shame... Still writing quality is 5 for me(well compare to others in this site)

Well here's the story. So basically I was just looking at the recently updated fanfictions on webnovel and came across this. I looked at the rating and just ignored the reviews and decides to read the first two chapters which was a mistake in my part. I even forgot to read the sypnosis of the story and just decided to just read the story which was another mistake. The first chapter I read, the mc reveals that he is from another world to people who are basically strangers to him aside from the fact that he knows them from the anime *Insert Face Palm*. Author if that's your logic then hopefully you never come across such situation such as the mc or else your stupidity will lead you to your demise. The author actually thinks that there is nothing wrong with revealing such information which I find a bit laughable since you only need common sense to know why you shouldn't reveal that which I doubt the author actually has any. The mc even shows his phone to the crew and I was actually wondering if he was going to mention about one piece manga as well🤣. Once I read the sypnosis then I exactly knew what this fanfic was going to be about. The sypnosis states that the mc will travel with Luffy and help him find the one piece. This fanfic I assume is going to just follow the canon with some interactions between mc and the crew. I could tell that the author and the mc is a fanboy of Luffy which makes me wonder. Author do you have a crush on Luffy???

In this story MC not have ambition,just MC want to be plot armor.anyway thank.

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Some dude rated this 5stars a bunch of times so we know someone has an alt account lol but the MC says he’s from a different world chapter 1 so don’t bother to read

The cringe level is 9000!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I dont know how this got into the top and i dont really want to know.....i also dont know how people can give this a 5 star......i mean im sorry to the author who will probably read this.....but this is honestly what i feel about your story.....it's disgusting........plot armors are used so d*mn often because there's that many f*king plot holes....i mean...seriously? I wasnt even finished with chapter 1 and i already wanted to drop it....i only reached till chapter 5.... Then tried looking somewhere in chapter 30+ to see if your writing has changed........no....nothings changed you answer plot holes by using plot armor and brute force, no explainations whatsoever......i mean sure everyone uses plot holes and plot armors....but in almost every event(ive seen so far). Like come on.........i seriously dont know how you got that high of a rating in this novel of yours......i didnt expect much when i saw a few reviews from other people but i dont usually believe them and read it myself to see if its actually a novel worth reading and this wasnt.......worth it.

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this is me giving an honest review. I'm going to be fair and not just say harsh things but the few small good things as well. the story in the beginning was good, a fresh and original way to wake up and find yourself in one piece ( though afterwards the way the OC tried to help out the straw hats even though he knew he was normal and had no powers was very unrealistic. no one in their right mind no matter how much they cared about Luffy in the crew in the show, end the end to them it's just an anime, nothing more or less, to put their lives on the line for especially when they're about to face the their first big hurdle on the Grand line against the strongest foe they've come across yet with logia abilities. for this part it would have been better if he have reincarnated in the East blue at least there he would have had a chance at surviving even though your normal this is if he'd still decided to follow Luffy by the way if you have went off on his own he would have been fine). but yeah so MC decides to go and at least warned the Rebellion which is still within human limits even though you might be regarded as a spy captured and imprisoned but still within human limits. but after this MC makes the dumbest most illogical decision especially coming from someone who already knows what kind of powers and strength the people from the one piece world have. he decides to go I try to kill crocodile with the palace soldiers just because he knows he's weak to water as if he hadn't seen Luffy get wrecked by crocodile even when we had the same strategy now this was stupid by all means just a forceful way to move the story along just so we can see the MC power awaken. now regardless of all things this is actually the part that I liked because of the title everyone was wondering what type of devil fruit the MC will get when I found out it was a water logia one which definitely could be considered the ultimate fruit in the one piece World by far I thought" wow if the author uses this power right I can forgive all the dumb s*** that happened earlier" and lo and behold he does MC uses the power and versatile and ingenious ways as you should if you are a reincarnator from Earth and even the comedy picks up along the way and the story just ends up jamming along with the one piece vibe with a few hiccups along the way(mc telling people he's from another world and I mean everybody and MC sharing knowledge that he knows of the future that is never a good thing in a story especially in a fanfic like one piece especially not with the main character like Luffy he's not going to want to know that anyway so why did you even open up your mouth there was absolutely no reason for you to do this you just wanted a reason to do a time travel Arc so you can go back in the past and collect Robin's mom and I could tell that you were even thinking about Odin's wife for a little bit but at least you have a little smidgen of Shame left and decided not to). this leads to after marineford Arc this is where stuff starting to get really bad as I said the MC ends up going back in time after a supposed death after the war ends up on Rogers ship sails the ocean with them for just a little while and actually ends up acknowledging him is your captain!!!!!????? hold up hold up I know people are giving you a lot of grief about fanboying over Luffy and stuff but at least once you decided something stick to it. ever heard of loyalty much do you think Zoro or any of the other crew would ever go and acknowledge somebody else as their Captain just because they sailed on the same ship as them for a little while? come on man. eventually after sailing around with Rodger for a while they meet Whitebeard clash with them a few times and eventually ends up meeting Odin and his wife who are who is basically the key to him getting back to his own time. the dumb part is he tries to play off her character as someone who is very manipulative and not understanding of others plight because she basically ends up using him to fight off kaido which is super dumb because you basically just went off and triggered one of the end games fights way before it's supposed to happen and not even with your own crew and Captain good job stealing that Adventure and fight from them. also Odin's wife character is nothing like that if she had the to send him back to his original time she would have done it the moment he asked especially when he told her he had a wife and kid he was going back to especially considering he and Odin are friends she definitely isn't the type to manipulate others for her own gains you can tell that just by reading the whole back story Oda does on the wano country. So eventually after being used to fight kaido MC gets sent back to his own time ends up loitering around fisherman Island waiting on the straw hats and expanding more on his water Powers by learning Fishman karate which should have been done way earlier by one of the Fishman on Rogers crew who knew Fishman karate and was probably stronger than jinbei at the time but author probably just wanted it for the excuse of hey let's have the MC interact with jinbei while on Fishman Island after this thing's get way worse all the women in the World start throwing themselves at the MC just because.... come on bro. turns out ultimate Fruit Stand For he can copy any devil fruit in the world so he's basically God now so no more tension between the fights or skill after all MC can just stop time and kill you in a second. MC also decides to take over all of Luffy's fights just because even though those fights are supposed to be for Luffy's growth and even now author is supposedly having the MC go to Wano in order to kill kaido over something he really shouldn't even be triggered over "oh no it turns out one of the seven scabbard's was a traitor I wasn't expecting that when I wrote this fanfic" LOL yeah it wouldn't have been such a big deal if you have went off on your own and got your own adventure instead of piggybacking off Luffy's. so yeah this turned into a rant basically a classic case of a good story gone bad in the middle and turning into a complete s*** by the end so not worth your time.

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For the surprise power a BODY OF GOLD is the conduct that enel use for his ship an Nami would love it💏......Love the novel ...Nami and Robin please and if you do the time skip go for ALVIDA and BELO BETTY