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Twilight I Bow To No One

作者: Daoist148866
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WebNovel で公開されている、Daoist148866 の作者が書いた Twilight I Bow To No One の小説を読んでください。Hello people im bad at writing so be warned. I wanted to try my hand at writing a fanfiction for myself so here it is I know twilight is kinda not everyone cup of tea but I wanted to try something eas...

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Hello people im bad at writing so be warned. I wanted to try my hand at writing a fanfiction for myself so here it is I know twilight is kinda not everyone cup of tea but I wanted to try something easy for now and I don't mind suggestions I take everything I can get.

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" Sebenarnya aku tidak akan pernah mengatakan hal ini sama kamu, Dai. Aku sangat mencintai kamu dan tidak pernah ada niat untuk mencintai orang lain selain kamu. Tapi, terpaksa hari ini aku harus mengatakannya biar kamu mengerti apa yang aku derita selama aku berpacaran sama kamu."ungkap Aulya. Badai hanya manggut-manggutkan kepala meskipun sebenarnya ia tidak tau apa yang dimaksudkan oleh Aulya. " Aku mau putus sama kamu. Aku tidak bisa menjalin hubungan dengan orang yang tidak mencintaiku sama sekali. Aku------ " " Kamu bicara apaan sih, Lya? Sudah, sudah. Ayo, aku hantarin kamu pulang." Badai berusaha mengalihkan pembicaraan. Ia sangat mencintai cewek itu dan tidak ingin putus darinya. Ia tidak pernah mencintai cewek lain seperti yang dituduhkan Aulya barusan, makanya ia memilih untuk mengajaknya pulang saja. Ia takut bila Aulya benar-benar meninggalkannya. " AKU INGIN PUTUS, Dai." " Jangan. Aku tidak ingin putus dari kamu. Aku mencintaimu, Lya. Hanya kamu, percayalah." Badai meraih tangannya dan mengecupnya dengan penuh kasih sayang. " Pembohong!!!! Aku melihatmu dengan cewek lain kemarin . Kamu selingkuh dengan cewek itu dibelakangku." Aulya membentak hanya untuk mencari alasan berpisah dari Badai. Kenyataannya justru dia lah yang mengkhianati cinta tulus Badai, tetapi ia dengan sengaja membalikkan fakta, dan dengan bodohnya Badai malah terjebak dalam permainannya. Darra menghentak-hentakkan kakinya dengan kasar. Ia berang. Seandainya ia bisa menelan orang, orang pertama yang akan ditelannya adalah kakak keduanya si Raka dan wanita brengsettt si Aulya Marsyan yang membodohi banyak cowok menggunaakan parasnya yang aduhai termasuk kakak kedua Darra, si Raka yang bodohnya melebihi batas normal. Jelas-jelas ia sudah melihat dan mendengar langsung rencana buruk Aulya kepada Raka, tetapi kakaknya yang kepala batu itu malah membentaknya dan hampir mendaratkan tangannya di pipi mulus Darra. Sebetulnya ia tidak pernah suka ikut campur urusan kedua kakaknya, tetapi tidak mungkin kan ia hanya menonton drama yang dilakukan oleh Aulya Marsyan, sang pembawa malapetaka dalam hidupnya. Bahkan, demi membela wanita gila harta itu Raka sampai tidak mengakuinya sebagai adik entah sampai kapan berlakunya. Ia hampir saja menghancurkan handphonenya, tapi------- Matanya terbelalak kaget. Jantungnya berdetak sangat cepat karena menahan amarah yang meluap-luap dari hatinya. Pandangannya tertuju pada dua insan yang berada tidak jauh darinya. Lagi-lagi yang ditemukannya adalah AULYA, makhluk astral dari neraka. Biarkan saja?? TIDAK. Tentu saja tidak. Cowok yang bersama Aulya adalah Badai Erlangga, pacar Aulya yang sudah hampir empat tahun menjalin kasih dengannya. Cukup kakaknya si Raka bodoh yang dibodohi Aulya, ia tidak akan pernah membiarkan penyihir licik itu membodohi yang lain juga. Badai dengan sabar mendengar alasan Aulya. Mungkin sudah terlanjur cinta sehingga ia tetap tidak ingin berpisah dari Aulya. " Kamu mempunyai cewek lain, Dai. Kamu pacaran sama dia saja. Aku tidak ingin mempunyai pacar yang mencintai dua orang sekaligus." tangis Aulya semakin meledak ketika melihat Aulya yang tiba-tiba sudah ada didepan sana yqng menatapnya dengan mata melotot marah. Ia sangat panik melihat Darra dan dengan sengaja ia menangis tiada henti. Badai semakin khawatir. Dia tidak ingin putus dengannya, tidak mau " Aku tidak pernah mencintai cewek lain, Lya. Aku hanya mencintai kamu seorang." " Maafkan aku, Dai. Aku------ " Aulya terkejut bukan main. Sebuah permen karet yang tadinya di mulut Darra tapi sekarang tertempel rapi di wajahnya. Darra mendekatinya dengan tatapan serigala yang disambut dengan sangat baik olehnya, sangat bengiss. Ia sangat jengkel dan sangat membenci Darra Anggrani. Ini pertama kalinya ia diperlakukan sehina ini. Badai mendongak menatap Darra. Ia geram, tidak sudi pacarnya diperlakukan seperti itu. Darra tersenyum sinis ke Aulya, tanpa memperdulikan tatapan maut dari Badai yang siap menelannya hidup-hidup.

Nitta_Arenda · 若者
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The Secrets of a Fox [BL]

Lirin: Ah, why can’t I ever find good friends? Is my taste that bad? Maybe it’s because they’re all spirits...I should look for friends on earth! Unsuspecting ML and his friends group that suddenly get chills: ??? •————————————• The Spirit realm was an interesting place. Unless born there one would mostly have a hard time grasping the customs...because what kind of place is centered on illusion and trickery?! And what if you’re a resident who believes that they can get by without deception! Lirin was born into one of the many noble families. His family wasn’t anything special just nobles, nowhere near the top. But Lirin just happened to be a genius. Even so what good is your genius in a world where deception is key and you refuse to use it for trickery. Where you trust everyone around you only for them to fool you time and time again...One day the young fox’s friends take things a bit too far. So the boy decides to leave! He can definitely find better friends on earth! Right? Unfortunately unless he wants trouble he can’t reveal his identity...sadly he never quite grew out of that habit of reverting back to his fox form when he gets too comfortable... •————————————• Hello~ I’m Caramel Honey welcome to my novel! Please ignore the complete chaos that is this entire work. I’m looking for a beta, anyone who knows what they’re doing qualifies. All the names in this story are common names or ones I made up, searched their meaning on google and then shoved into the story. All places in the story are fictional (except for earth ofc) and are not intended to have any relation to real places or things. And now that that’s out of the way please give my novel a chance! ⚠️SLOW UPDATES⚠️ Edits: I’ve been stuck on a chapter for a while not knowing how to format it...my first chapter is like 18 pages. I started comparing it to other novels and it is apparently long by a lot of standards so I’ll be shortening my chapters maybe 2000 words instead of 4000? Idk we’ll see as it progresses. Also I know the novel’s really choppy and the writing quality is terrible but it’s like that for a reason. One I want to take my lowest works and raise the quality so my highest is even better. And two because I’m dealing with shit irl so my main focus is getting words published right now, once I reach a certain point in the plot-line (no I’m not telling that’s spoilers!) I plan on going back and rewriting most of the previous chapters. I may add in more info or plot points in the rewritten chapters as well as moving around certain events. Like I said we’ll see, I have plot-points planned out, not the novel. Like before I actually started writing this whole thing I could tell you the main character left the spirit realm because he had shitty friends. He didn’t even have a name until I was writing the chapter. I knew what facts I wanted to add in, like he should have twins who are his besties, he needed to be a red white and black fox with certain properties and things like that. But nothing I do is planned. I love being spontaneous like that! Give me more freedom and encourages my creativity! Even if nothing fits together quite yet...I just add in facts that I wanted in the story but am currently too lazy to work in properly like I should be doing... ¯\_(;¬ω¬)_/¯ (No seriously I’m completely ignoring things like world building in favor of advancing the plot. Originally I was going to do 3 chapters on Lirin’s life in the spirit realm but that’ll be for the reset now) So yea! Everything will be revamped later on! Currently the only thing you’ll actually get from this novel is the storyline...Oops? (〜;óヮò)〜*:・゚✧

Caramel_Honey · ファンタジー
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CipherStorm
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hey author please upload more chapters on twilight fanfic man everyone loves those fanfic that get updates regularly and in continuation you try so many fanfiction and none has a chapter close to 100, man trust me I am not against your ideas you have some great storyline for fanfiction but they look like they are failed because you're not working on single fanfiction it's just my personal opinion but try to write fanfiction in continuation and you'll see magic you won't believe but the support you'll get for just updating one fanfic is on another level everyone will support you I hope you'll consider my request and twilight fanfic it's I like it but you can choose any fanfic but continue only one at time try to create more that 100-150 chapters you'll see what I have said was true and if you cross over 200-300 chapters man you'll be The Author Of Fanfiction..............

CipherStorm
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Hey man it damm about time you should update more chapters man can't wait anymore 😅 please 🥺🙏🥺 update more chapters

Luna_Phantomhigh
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Please write more!!!! This is the best story I ever have read, so please more chapters!!!! I want to know what happened next. This story is very interesting!!!

Joshua_Welsh
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Could you please update i would love to continue reading the story as this is a very good concept🥺🥺

Aiden_Dover
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The reason why I will not read this is because of the first impression you make. Your summary is pretty much one sentence, and yet, you misspelled hooked and instead spelled hacked. This makes me extremely nervous because, one, it is such an easy word to spell, and two, it makes me queston whether the rest of you story will be like this. I suggest you use the Grammarly app to help with your writing.

Gd_Sys
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Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeerreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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