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the surviving uchiha

the mc will be reincarnated in the world of naruto. As an uchiha, he will venture into this world of infinite possibilities trying to get stronger. It's a tragic world, but with so many surprises and possibilities unpredictable. I have a lot of ideas on how I'm going to make him strong and at the same time give as little script as possible. I hope my horrible grammar and lack of writing experience don't get in my way too much. And the mc will not have a Harem, system, desires or anything like that. After all, being born an Uchiha with a lifetime of memory is already a super hack. I hope I can bring this character to life and know how to write well about the ones that already exist and try to have a relative development of the plot. If there are any plot holes or if the story is getting worse please let me know after all I am a writer in training.

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2 Chs

studying

As the baby was tired he soon fell asleep in the mother's arms.

The Batosai thinking about that put the baby on the bed and said to Makui: "Makui, as he woke up so I must go back to fight in the war. My agreement with the hokage was this, take good care of him while In the war".

Makui sadly says: "Can't you reconsider?"

Batosai replies: "you know we're in debt, besides that's a good way for me to be promoted to jounin. Don't worry, Fugaku said at a meeting that this war is ending"

Batosai says: "let's sleep, tomorrow I go to war again"

The two went to sleep. As for Kusagi. He ended up sleeping in their room.

In the morning Kusagi woke up early and began to locate himself in this story.

MC POV

The Kusagi awakens and then begins to recap what is happening.

Kusagi thinks excitedly and at the same time worried: 'Wow, I'm in Naruto and even better, I'm a fucking Uchiha. Should I be excited or worried?'

Kusagi throws the worry out the window and thinks: 'I don't care, the important thing is to be able to make a susanoo. I think I'm a bit megalomaniac'

Kusagi's excitement subsides and he sighs, 'I should have learned Japanese in my previous life, but that's okay. A new life, new goals, new family and the unknown. It will be exciting, I hope.

So Kusagi formed a plan: 'so the plan is to learn to speak, read and write. Then I see what to do'

I was contemplating until my stomach growled loudly.

Kusagi smiles: 'I need to eat urgently or I'm starving. I hate depending on others so I'm going out alone'.

I get out of bed silently and try to walk but it takes a lot of effort and I don't have coordination yet so I'm really crawling.

When I arrived in the kitchen I felt my body burning and with an even greater hunger. And I thought 'arrgh, what the fu...' my mind was clouded until tu turned black.

After a while I woke up to my mother desperately healing me while my father was walking around. As I didn't have much to do, I started crying for food.

And of course my very desperate mother didn't understand until my stomach growled.

Makui sighs and says: "so that's what you wanted, phew"

Makui then opens a smile then excitedly says: "you have to eat because you are underdeveloped"

Soon she wanted to start breastfeeding me with milk. I was feeling strange but hunger spoke louder, I ended up sucking with all of them until I fell asleep and ended up sleeping.

Batosai seeing all this sighs and asks again: "Are you guys really going to be okay?"

Makui calms down and says: "we'll go, he was just exhausted and hungry. make sure you're ok too"

So Batosai eats breakfast and leaves to inform the hokage.

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Later Kusagi wakes up and says with determination, 'I can't go on like this, I need to include physical training to develop my body too'.

\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\------ 3 month later------////////////////////

Inside the Uchiha residence, a weak-looking boy was sitting with a little book in his hand.

Kusagi absently speaks: "so this is how you make a comma"

Makui questions Kusagi: "Kusagi are you studying law?"

Kusagi replies bored: "yes mom!"

Kusagi asks, "Mom, do you want help?"

Makui says with a frown: "no, you might get hurt"

Kusagi desperately asks, "So, can I leave?". 'I don't like to study the area of ​​Human Sciences, especially language. good thing japanese is easier grammatically than my main language, but it's still quite different'

Angry Makui scolds Kusagi: "For the thousandth time. Only when you can protect yourself enough"

Kusagi asks hopefully, "Can I read your books to pass the time?"

Makui sighs and replies, "It's okay, as long as you don't get hurt"

So I jump out of my chair and quicken my steps to the library, then open the door and see bookshelves everywhere since my parents liked to read to pass the time.

I go there to see if I can find anything interesting and look at the medicine section and think. 'I found the bodybuilding lifestyle very interesting in my previous life. If I learn more about my body, it will greatly improve the quality of my training.

I get up and go to the first module.

"ANATOMY OF THE HUMAN BODY"

I look at the module and start to sweat, it looked like it had about 2000 pages!!! I dragged the book. I tried to lift it, but it slipped out of my hand and ended up falling off the shelf making a crash.

My mom appears out of nowhere making it look like she used shushin, looking annoyed she says "Kusagi, I didn't tell you to be careful."

kusagi shrugs his shoulders and says, "Sorry mom, I just think this book will help me get stronger and overcome my physical weakness."

Makui's surprise says, "This book is the first book for when you want to become a medical ninja. It's the book you have to read in your first year of academy, as it's the basis of most upcoming books."

Makui then points his finger playfully and says, "In short, you won't be able to understand anything, let alone have the discipline to read it in full."

Kusagi insists: "but I want to read"

Makui thinks, 'I don't think he's going to read, but as a mother I have to encourage him to study. Since he wants to read, I'll make a deal to encourage him to try harder to read'

Makui then responds while placing the book on a table: "I'll let you read it, but you'll have to take a test when you're done. If you read it I'll take you for a walk and buy you whatever you want."

Kusagi excitedly yells, "Deal closed!!!"

"if you want another book call me" Makui says smiling as he leaves the room.

\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\------8 months later------////////////////////

With routine being, he would read in the morning while writing questions to practice his handwriting and also better memorize the contents of the book.

In the afternoon, he works out, stretches while he relaxes playing with his mother.

At night, I answer the little diagnostic assessment, which I write in the morning and when I finish, and I go to sleep.

Of course, he doesn't forget to eat between breaks in each activity.

\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\------Fanfic Author------////////////////////

Give me tips on how to improve this story. Grammar must be rubbish and I admit I do it on google translator because my english is so rotten.

Also mention some historical events that may be missing.

I'm trying to build redundant stuff, like dialogue, I want to make my characters more alive, so don't expect the mc to remember all the stuff.

I have ideas of what I want to happen, but I'm still thinking about what to do to make the story dense until then.

I still don't know how to do a good world building, so help me.

I really don't know if I'm getting the hyperactive trait Kusagi or Overprotective Mother Makui.