The Monk in the MCU

I was reading it out of curiosity but I ended up disappointed I only see things after another without context or explanations and there is no way to know if time passes or it is just a moment of a event to event, above all it is the typical op story where the mc or protagonist has everything as if nothing at the beginning of the story without serious development beyond the basics

I don't know what is good about this novel it's like reading re:monster but worse

Realistic comments here I was very excited about the power he was going to have but ended up being disappointed. The writing is childish, the MC is weird and his feelings useless in the moments used, MC is already trying to control himself when he has just woken up in the middle of a genocide, in short everything is badly organized.

This is such a good story idea with a great character. I hope you dont drop and post a good amount of chapters!

Well, it started off iffy, but it had potential. unfortunately, everything happens really fast, not allowing the story to progress fluently. Also, for some reason, he became a pushover as soon he met the x-men. Read to chapter 24, but it got unbearable. Also, the Mc goes from wise monk to juvenile child, then to subpar mob boss, and it gets annoying.

1 Star for dropping and looking at your profile there is no finished story.

Writing style is kinda childish but its pretty good if you ignore that and besides that everything else is decent an id say its a 4.2 out of 5

Just not good, the power is op but mc is stupid and no plotline development only training and using new powers. Mc is literally close to five creation gods in power and can tank the real phoenix force but mc doing unreasonable things like making gotei 13 in china for peace ✌

Its good, I do not know why there are some bad reviews, but I guess that the lack of anything sexual was too much for those people. There was one chapter where I was like wth happened but it is overall amazing!

It's like something written by a chatbot. Everything tangentially makes sense in a semi-coherent fashion but drastically and repeatedly contradicts what was written 1-2 chapters ago.

This Fanfic is just astonishing truly great. Author please continue this fanfic it’s just to good to be dropped 🥹✅✅. From one of your biggest fans I beg continue the story ✌🏾.

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every fic of yours has a couple people criticising it needlessly, wagwan?So far its pretty good, the subjugation of the gang seemed to be a spur of the moment decision that have no purpose and would likely damage his image. The fact that a woman with good morals and had a following in the gang seemed a tad bit too practical when I read it but what do I know, I haven't gotten far anyway, anyway good luck and don't drop

This Fanfiction-Story is Omoshiroi (Interesting, Amusing, Fascinating, Funny, Enjoyable, Entertaining, Fun). Therefore, All 5☆. While i want to write more but that will become spoiler. Hope & pray that AUTHOR won't give up and drop but make the story one of the greatest, and complete the story with gracefullness! Will give a proper review after the completion of the story.

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i just think thumbnail of ichibei would make the story more popular....otherwise it is a decent story.

Just nothing to be expect. But I kinda like it.

If you are into good fanfics come and read this monk in mcu is truly exceptional ✅👏🏾 honest review. Just try it out 😌