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Narciss84
Narciss84Lv41yr
2023-10-19 00:42

every fic of yours has a couple people criticising it needlessly, wagwan?So far its pretty good, the subjugation of the gang seemed to be a spur of the moment decision that have no purpose and would likely damage his image. The fact that a woman with good morals and had a following in the gang seemed a tad bit too practical when I read it but what do I know, I haven't gotten far anyway, anyway good luck and don't drop

The Monk in the MCU

Cedric_7512
4.2
43 Chs

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Cedric_7512
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Interesting. The subjugation of the gang was indeed a spur of the moment decision. But it does serve a purpose. And the fact that the woman had a following is because the strongest one among them was protective of her. And when he decided to stand at her side, the others followed. Keap reading though. I'm interested to see what you think.

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Miki_Marlo75
Miki_Marlo75Lv4

I was reading it out of curiosity but I ended up disappointed I only see things after another without context or explanations and there is no way to know if time passes or it is just a moment of a event to event, above all it is the typical op story where the mc or protagonist has everything as if nothing at the beginning of the story without serious development beyond the basics

2yr

BLITZE_READER
BLITZE_READERLv4

I don't know what is good about this novel it's like reading re:monster but worse

2yr
Little_El
Little_ElLv3

Realistic comments here I was very excited about the power he was going to have but ended up being disappointed. The writing is childish, the MC is weird and his feelings useless in the moments used, MC is already trying to control himself when he has just woken up in the middle of a genocide, in short everything is badly organized.

2yr
Robert_Thompson97
Robert_Thompson97Lv15

This is such a good story idea with a great character. I hope you dont drop and post a good amount of chapters!

2yr
MellyK9
MellyK9Lv15

Well, it started off iffy, but it had potential. unfortunately, everything happens really fast, not allowing the story to progress fluently. Also, for some reason, he became a pushover as soon he met the x-men. Read to chapter 24, but it got unbearable. Also, the Mc goes from wise monk to juvenile child, then to subpar mob boss, and it gets annoying.

1yr
CandyChopper
CandyChopperLv6

1 Star for dropping and looking at your profile there is no finished story.

1yr
AkashicLibrary
AkashicLibraryLv1

Writing style is kinda childish but its pretty good if you ignore that and besides that everything else is decent an id say its a 4.2 out of 5

2yr
typicalanimewatchr
typicalanimewatchrLv12

Just not good, the power is op but mc is stupid and no plotline development only training and using new powers. Mc is literally close to five creation gods in power and can tank the real phoenix force but mc doing unreasonable things like making gotei 13 in china for peace ✌

1yr
ok_ok_1494
ok_ok_1494Lv1

Its good, I do not know why there are some bad reviews, but I guess that the lack of anything sexual was too much for those people. There was one chapter where I was like wth happened but it is overall amazing!

2yr
Skyguy345
Skyguy345Lv4

It's like something written by a chatbot. Everything tangentially makes sense in a semi-coherent fashion but drastically and repeatedly contradicts what was written 1-2 chapters ago.

1yr
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