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The Hall of Valor

作者: DRACO137
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----Completed---- ----Synopsis---- There are several Death Reapers in the world, and each of them is assigned souls who die a certain way. One day a mortal man named Haalfrin catches the eye of 2 Reapers – Freyya the death god of mortals fallen in battle, and Das, the reaper of souls who are killed by time – by old age. For reasons unknown yet, Das and Freyya each want to claim Haalfrin’s mortal soul. Being a warrior craving excitement and a life worth living, Haalfrin makes an easy target for Freyya (or so she thinks), as she creatively tries to think of ways to make sure Haalfrin doesn’t come back from his adventures alive, while her counterpart Das is trying to keep the mortal alive just long enough to expire naturally. …The only catch is that Haalfrin himself has recently lost his entire clan, and his only desire left to him is to die a cool death. Maybe this way, he can make one final story he can tell his brothers when he meets them on the other side. ----Author Notes---- 1. I don't plan on Contracting Webnovel for this Book, since it's just a hobby right now and this is my first book. SO, THIS BOOK IS COMPLETELY FREE. It's copyrighted though, so don't take this book and sell it - obviously. 2. When I showed some siblings the synopsis, they thought this was going to be a comedy. This story does have a few funny parts (particularly in Volume 4), but that's it. As a whole, this story is NOT a comedy. It's a story about a man who wants to die.

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Chapter 1The Old Raider (1)

Volume 1: Kareen Raider

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Violent coughing sounds are coming from the other side of a sturdy wooden door, and a young woman's voice shrieks, "Haalfrin! You're sick! Get back in bed NOW before I bash your head in!"

On the other side of the thick door is an old man hunched over on the side of his bed – struggling to put on his own miss fitting armor, as it had been made for him in a time before his bones had shrunk and his muscles shriveled with age.

There is a young woman with dark skin and black, wavey hair standing on the side of his bed with a worried look on her face as she sees the old man wheeze and puffs painfully in his struggle.

Finally, the girl can't stop herself anymore, so she puts down her basin of water and implores, "Please! Elder Haalfrin! You can hardly lift a rock above your shoulders anymore! You need to rest!"

Old Haalfrin just waves her off crankily, "Bah! I'm off to join the others! It's sweet mead and roasted lamb's leg for me! … Fetch me my sword, will ya? It's underneath the bed."

The girl's father used to tell stories about Elder Haalfrin, and he was always made out to be a man whose chief virtue was bravery and reason – a trait seldom seen together.

The teenage girl tries again to stop the elder, but age must have made the old raider even more stubborn than her father remembers.

"I haven't swung a sword in so long," Elder Haalfrin argues back with his heels dug in the ground, "I've been antsy for decades! I'm meant to be out there with the boys, swinging my sword and shield!"

Seeing he isn't going to listen, Haalfrin just huffs, "Enough! I've had enough of sitting on that stupid bed, doing nothing but battling frail health and weakness until death finally wins!"

The girl Reeda hadn't seen the old man rant for this long in a very long time, so she knows he's VERY agitated.

When young Reeda sees the old man struggling to bend down to get his heavy sword, she tears up a little and finally offers to help; she quickly bends down and grabs his heavy sword for him and helps him straighten his back again.

"Thanks, girl."

She sniffs back a tear. "If you were grateful, you'd get back in bed and drink your medicine."

He takes the sword from her and looks at her without that previous stubborn attitude. Then he abruptly hugs her, saying, "If I'd had a granddaughter, she'd have been just like you. Thanks for making me take my medicine every day."

The clan raiders are getting ready to set sail today, and Reeda has a strong feeling her old mentor figure won't be coming back.

Just as she's trying to hold back her tears, Haalfrin says, "I got a chest of money beneath one of the loose stones in the fireplace. It's my life savings, and I'd like for you to inherit it. The house is yours as well."

Haalfrin then slings his sword onto his back, and he leaves the house as the girl behind him is bawling her eyes out with the door wide open.

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After he leaves, Haalfrin looks down at the pond in front of his house and sees his reflection. He's wearing his favorite armor, decorated with Kareen tribal markings, as well as the personal marks of all his former raiders he spent his youth with.

Unlike Reeda and the other Kareen tribesmen, Haalfrin isn't dark skinned. Instead, he's pale white, just like the locals here.

The Kareen are nomadic thieves and sometimes mercenaries; he came across some while they sailed past his homeland, and they accepted him as a member of the tribe.

Over the years, he'd had a blast sailing the seas with them – Chief Grotto and the lot. Haalfrin just looks down and bitterly smiles. "I thought I could adventure away the days of my youth, and that I'd get an arrow through the neck or a mage's fire in my face… I didn't expect to live this old at all."

Kareen men live such violent lives that everyone Haalfrin knew in his youth were either lost at sea, or they were killed in battle. In the end, Haalfrin is the only elder left in this world from his generation.

Having memories of a time that nobody else has shared feels…strange… and lonely. For these past ten years, he'd whiled away his days rotting on a bed, waiting miserably to die.

As he continues looking at his own reflection, he imagines himself in his former days of glory. He was a tall, burly, and upright beast of a man with an intimidating glare.

"Now? I've gone frail, my back is hunched, and my limbs had shriveled and shrunk. My armor doesn't even fit me anymore."

Getting irrationally angry for a second, he swipes his sword scabbard into the pond and scatters his reflection before marching away.

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After a short walk, Haalfrin goes to the main hall, where the younger men are celebrating before they go to seek wealth and adventure.

Hearing the roaring, drunk laughter, Haalfrin stands before the front door feeling more than a little awkward. He hasn't come here in years, and many of the younger faces inside are strangers to him by now – no longer looking like the children he once knew.

All those times Reeda had to change his soiled pants have eaten away at his confidence, leaving him feeling too ashamed to open that door and face his clan. He's no longer the strong, dependable leader he used to be, after all.

Over the years, as Haalfrin grew older, he eventually kept to his home – no longer intermingling with the younger folk.

After growing so weak and useless, he'd convinced himself he was no longer good enough… "But today, I hope this courage I've gathered is enough… Whatever. I'm headed in."

He opens the double doors with some difficulty, then hobbles in. The young Chief is in the middle of bragging about their latest pillage – one of the coastal cities. "Yeah, with the Alasta Kingdom being at war, this is the perfect time to pillage! There are no men to defend the towns!"

However, the moment Haalfrin comes in full view of everyone, the chief stops his story and stares at the newcomer, along with everyone else.

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0 :Auxiliary Volume
1 :Kareen Raider (vol. 1/6)
2 :Archmage's Apprentice (vol. 2/6)
3 :Demon of the Pit (vol. 3/6)
4 :Otherworldly Venture (vol. 4/6)
5 :The Eternal War (vol. 5/6)
6 :The Mantling Ritual (vol. 6/6)

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All right. I have some final thoughts on this book before I leave it behind for good. So, I've never written a book all the way through until this one, and it was a very new experience for me. I've always enjoyed writing, but I never really had the motivation to sit down and finish something until now. You can thank Covid19 for this book. Really, with the depression of being by myself most of the time (lockdown / social distancing) and working night shift, the frustration just built up, and I really wanted to do something useful. ------- So, here are a few things I learned from writing this book: 1) It's not a good idea to just sit down and start WRITING. Before I write, I need to make more detailed notes on where the story is headed. As a result of not doing that, the first 90 or so chapters don't have much direction. That problem, however, has mostly gone away by that point, since I had a much better idea of where the story was supposed to go. 2) I used to write simply when I feel like it or feel inspired. For this book, however, I basically forced myself to sit down for about 3-5 hours a day and write. As a result, I look back on the story and feel like cursing, since I've gotten some better ideas for the story, only to realize that it's already written out. The story flow also would've been cleaner and more compelling. Really, I honestly feel like the parts that I enjoyed writing are the parts the readers would probably enjoy reading. There are certainly many parts that I enjoyed writing a LOT, but there are other parts that simply felt painful to think about. Every time Prince Tallus or Prince Kanus was on screen, I just felt bored. Every time a dragon is onscreen, I really enjoyed myself. Volumes 3 & 5 felt amazing to write. Many parts of Volume 4 were a blast (especially the Lord Fheldin parts). The beginning of Volume 6 was really fun. The mid-section of Volume 6 (the Lareen chapters) felt a little painful to write, but the second half (the start of the Mantling Ritual) felt awesome.

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