The Elemental Legacies

Hi! The author's review here. I just want you guys to give this series a chance first before leaving a review. I promise that this series will get better over time as I improve based on the feedbacks and reviews received. I welcome all kinds of feedbacks and reviews that want me to improvise. I will delete hatred, insult and shaming reviews without proper context that I can take so that I can improve my writing. You may not like the series and I will be okay with it but there are limit to what can be said or done as I am still on a journey to become a better author. But I assure you, you will fall in love with this series. Thank you.

Stop at chapter 15! Not because it is bad. But I am afraid of running out of chapters. Hahahaha! You guys should read this one. It is good and worth the read.

Good novel. Even though after two chapters only the author introduce Elion, I dont think that should be a problem since the earlier chapters contribute much to the main plot. Didnt regret to give this new series a read.

Hi! I have read until Chapter 3. Even though it is still early for me to write a review, I just came across that this is the second time Noah trying his luck with this series. So this early review is for supporting him. He changed the title, the cover and even the synopsis. What I noticed, the synopsis did not do the justice for this series. No wonder most authors said synopsis is the most important part in "selling" a book. For the first three chapters, I can guarantee you that this series is different than what you have read. It is the same feeling and instinct whenever you see a new manga that you feel, "This one is going to be a big hit." In terms of writing, it is good for a webnovel. You cant expect the newbie authors here to have a very high quality of writing since it would be costly to hire an editor. In terms of updates, I believe the author already had many chapters written but yet to be upload since had mass released this series before. So you can expect a stability in the updates. For the story development, the concept of elemental power is not something new. Same goes for the aura power. We have seen this quite a lot of time. But, the way how the power is wielded and written is good and can make you excited. The same goes to how the fighting scenes were written. For characters, I only came across a few of them since it is still early. But I like the way Noah wrote about them and introduce them. Only for the head of the families part that felt unnecessary to be introduced if they were just for the sake of a few unnecessary lines. I reserve my comment on the world building since it is still early for me to comment about it. Similar to others, I will come back later for another review.

In terms of writing or people here call grammatical errors, I dont find any big issues that can disturb my reading experience. It is something that people should expect on webnovel where most of the authors are newbie. For the stability of the updates, I am always notified of a new chapter update everyday. The past few days, five chapters updated daily. That is cool but I hope you will not burden yourself that much. As a reader, I dont mind in waiting everyday for just a chapter since I dont really have that much time in a day to spend here. Thus far, I really like how the story developed. I can see the consistency in the plot and how it progressed. What the MC wants to do and everything is clear and make sense. There are too many characters but the way the characters were introduced make them memorable and there are not the side characters without contributing to the plot. Similar to other reviews, I am still having a bit issue in imagining the setting especially the world. What kind of world Solara is? That is for you to imagine. Anyways, I am looking forward on how this series is going to be on webnovel.

At first I am wondering who was the MC. I thought the MC would be King Anderson where he would die and reincarnated. But I was wrong. The first two chapters were there to help build the story and the plot better. Those two chapters also act as teaser for what to expect from the series. I really like how Noah introduced the MC and other characters. I dont really like a story that has too many characters for me to remember. But with the flashbacks, you get to know all the characters slowly and easily since they had their significance way of introduction. The concept of elemental powers is not new. I can see the author tried to make it better by using different combination of how each elemental power is wielded. Still, it is not something new but with how the story unfolds, it is not an issue at all. My only problem is to imagine the world background. Is it a modern world or something like the world during the empires age. But I can say that it is a combination of both since this is an entirely different world than the Earth. So far, I really enjoy this series and I hope I dont need to lower the rating and give out a better rating as I continue to read. I am writing early review just to support the author.

I havent read much. Up untill chapter 7 but i really like how the story is written. The elemental powers really caught my attention and interest. For me, the idea is fresh at the start of the story until now and how the story unfolds. In the early chapters, there are a lot of flashbacks but everything really contribute to the story progression and each flashbacks have date and year. So you wont be confused. Plus I really like how there are many characters involved but each one of them really impacting the main storyline and the scenes with the other characters did not add as fillers only. I will continue to read and will change the review accordingly.

Normally, when I read any books, I would find myself wondering on why certain scenes or events being written. Most of the scenes and events in TEL, not all, however, are really making a significance impact on the storyline. It is as if you are not really reading but like the author was trying to really write about the life of the characters in TEL. There are 2-3 that still made me wonder but those were not that bad and still deserve a 5 STARS on that aspect. For the rest (writing, updates, characters, world), there are good but not at the level of how the story developed.

[CHARACTERS REVIEW] I was one of the people who literally judged your book without reading it first. The cover is so-so and the synopsis should have been made better. Its okay since I have came across with lots of books where their synopsis didnt do the books justice. I just want to write the review for the characters. At first I feel like you are introducing too much characters in this series. But slowly I get it. Each and every characters are well-introduced and making me feel like learning and knowing them better. With the flashbacks, I can learn more about the significance of each character. Same goes with the date and place. These allow me to really understand what, where and why the scene is happening as well as why the characters are introduced. At first I was a bit skeptical about the quality of this series but guess what. I was wrong. Give it a read and you will understand.

It is a good series. If properly planned for the coming chapters, it can be on par with other popular novels here on WN. Over the time, I believe this series will become better.

I just want to give my support to NC. I know that he is going big. Maybe someone on par with JKS and few others (Im sorry since I rarely remember the authors' name. Mostly their books).

I just want to support Noah, my new favorite author on WN. Why didnt u write earlier? Luckily i was on the search for a good read since im waiting for updates on other novels and found the Elemental Legacies. Keep writing!