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The darkness inside.

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What is The darkness inside.

WebNovel で公開されている、Anam_zulfiqar の作者が書いた The darkness inside. の小説を読んでください。follow her... or yourself through the mist, try to understand what the writer has wrote because its a mystery with in her mind....

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follow her... or yourself through the mist, try to understand what the writer has wrote because its a mystery with in her mind.

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He lost two babies: A mother and a child!

They had met accidentally, atleast that was what she thought. During that time, she was owned without her knowing. She's been cherished, she's been protected and guarded, she's been saved countless times before, by the devil yet so gentle towards her. A lean man approaches her with an imposing aura. A man who's been trained to protect people ( especially her ). "Miss, an order from master, You're not allowed to have a boyfriend or any intimate relationship towards the opposite sex! Me: '.....'what the hell is he talking about" Who are you? I sked him. "A friend, Miss" he said (why were you walking in the park leisurely madame, we're just passing by and yet the devil saw you from a far, afraid that you will get a boyfriend, like seriously? who would get a boyfriend instantly in a park) "Well, sorry to dissapoint you, not so approachable man, I'm going to meet my boyfriend right now! I said to him". "This man is scary, there is something in him that will let you feel fear, and a warning that tells you to stay away from him, anyway, no one's going to approach him for sure, when his face already tells you to, "FUCK OFF YOU USELESS CREATURES" While the two persons are arguing with each other, a devil ascended from hell approaches them and heard the last words she said. " What did you say? he asked angrily, grab her wrist that will surely leaves a finger marks after. " I stared at my second attacker appreciatively. "Amara! I talk to myself internally, were you doting to your attacker? come on, show him how independent and strong woman you are! Well, when I said that my first attacker is not approachable, that word is non existent to this man, you won't even dared to look at him in a first place, instead you will bow and cower in front of him. "What did you say? he asked again with warning. "I..ah..I..ah,"I said while stuttering. Collecting my courage, "I said I HAVE A BOYFRIEND, AND I LOVE HIM", I said impasizely, hoping that the last words will send them away. "What is wrong with them and with this BOYFRIEND THING? Beside them, the assistant thought to himself: '.....' Why were the future madame is shameless, claiming she have a boyfriend, tsk!. Madame, stop spouting nonsense, the master knows that you don't have a boyfriend ever since your world begin! "Well congrats, said the devil while smiling mockingly. "But, you have to met him right now and end your relationship. This is me being nice to you. "Seriously! nice! end my relationship! how in the world am I going to end it! when it's non existent! "Yes! Surprise! I don't have a boyfriend, and the worst thing is that I don't even have and had a boyfriend before! "Opppsss, don't tell them! While thinking of how I'm going to talk sane with this crazy man. He approaches me, lean his head near my ear, tapping my head like a child, which infuriates me, and complain I'm not that small! He smells so manly, he's seductive, handsome and strong, a lot 9f girls are maybe lining up for him. "By the way you look beautiful, he said and smiled so nicely, but you're so thin, I don't want my wife to be skinny! And past through me towards his car. "I must be dreaming, yes! it must be a dream! While contemplating if I'm dreaming, the first attacker face me. "You two look good in each other, a perfect couple. Indeed!" I stay rooted for a second, and realizes what he said, "I'm beautiful" And then lightning strikes me! "Yeaahhh!!!, I shouted " I'm not thin you son of a chauvinistic bachelor, you're just fat. And I'm not your future wife you idiot!!! I'm a future nun! I hissed angrily at him before he enters his car. " She's so cute,and he laugh! I can't wait her to be mine. Assistant: '.....' why is it that he's happy, doesn't he realize what future madame just said earlier and she clearly loathed him, sigh! what a low EQ.

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Anam_zulfiqar
Anam_zulfiqar作者Anam_zulfiqar

hey! I'm the writer of this story its kind of real but gets fictional in certain areas as if u are using your imagination. im writing this review here so that the readers know that these are my thoughts its nothing crazy though it is tragic that these thoughts lurk inside a teenagers head read it maybe you find it relatable i mean everybody is just surviving at this point. A.Z.F

daylightmoon123445
daylightmoon123445Lv1daylightmoon123445

The author is so poetic, that every chapter is filled with a riddle, a cryptic puzzle that needs to be cracked. The chapters are small but don't underestimate the weight of the story to be small too. The rich use of symbolism, hyperbole, and hard-hitting quotes just makes this story so interesting. PS. keep a tissue box with you at all times, very important! This novella needs all the recognition it deserves, hopefully, there could be a sequel to this in the form of a novel, diving deep into the character's relationship with their inner child, and how they would heal. Awesome story, kudos to the author!

DaoistsCdCIW
DaoistsCdCIWLv1DaoistsCdCIW

very well written so far. its not fiction nor reality by what I can tell but it sure does tell a story weirdly i relate to it which I normally don't so for me this was definitely a first for me can't wait for the new chapter! ^^

Daoistg5kNkf
Daoistg5kNkfLv1Daoistg5kNkf

so far so good! this is underrated tbh please release more chapters i want to know what happens next! :] this is quite relatable and you portray that in an enticing way!

PenDora56
PenDora56Lv13PenDora56

This is a very nice story with interesting scenes, though the novel is short, it is worth reading. 🥰🥰🥰 I also hope to read more from the author ☺️

coco1193
coco1193Lv1coco1193

In each chapter, the author's poetic brilliance is evident, skillfully crafting a tapestry of enigmatic riddles and cryptic puzzles that beckon to be unraveled. The inner dialogue of the characters is brilliantly portrayed, adding a touch of insanity to the tale. However, for readers less familiar with poetry, a background story or explanation could be beneficial to fully appreciate the nuances within the narrative. Despite this minor wish, the overall experience remains a captivating journey into the realm of literary artistry. Keep it up dear author!

JayZee_007
JayZee_007Lv2JayZee_007

The story is cool. So far so good! Please release more chapters i want to know what happens next! It's an interesting setup for the book. Please continue writing it.

Tifala
TifalaLv1Tifala

What can highlight a good transfer of thoughts. But the problem is that the chapters are as short as possible (I see this for the first time). Even if it's a story. What was written below about 3k and 4k words in a chapter so few write. Basically, write 2k and 1.5k per chapter. You need at least 1k in each chapter and add plot directly to that story.

B_l_a_n_k_2167
B_l_a_n_k_2167Lv2B_l_a_n_k_2167

Since its in a short form, it has great potential and I like how it's building up its character and surrounding. I apologize for the misunderstanding it as a novel.

HelenaHomerHere
HelenaHomerHereLv3HelenaHomerHere

pretty good right now. I rlly enjoy the story but I still need more chapters to see how it ends

Estheria_9726
Estheria_9726Lv1Estheria_9726

nice to find an actual good story when ur reading all these other same thing and different scenarios kinda stories its nice to finally read something i can relate to the and the enigmatic poetry of this author is impeccable. you have done us teens poetic justice keep going!

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