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The Broken Bonds

作者: I_K2ut
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What is The Broken Bonds

WebNovel で公開されている、I_K2ut の作者が書いた The Broken Bonds の小説を読んでください。Eeyolian is a young child who saw her house burned, her world destroyed, and her family killed. She was left to travel the expanse of a deathly land alone, and though she was not alone, she felt lonel...

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Eeyolian is a young child who saw her house burned, her world destroyed, and her family killed. She was left to travel the expanse of a deathly land alone, and though she was not alone, she felt lonely. In a cruel twist of fate, she found herself hiding within the very land that destroyed everything she once called home. As she explores her new reality, she meets Noah, and over the years, they become friends, and she also grows curious about everything he represents. However, along the way, they share the same existential crisis. they are tiny, tiny people in a massive, uncaring, indifferent world. The Broken Bonds is not about futility but a mystery. how is someone like Eeyolian carry on forward, not only invest in others but to keep shouldering more and more burdens on top of her own?

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ExeloGard
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so far loving the story, i enjoy calm slow paced novel that focus on the main characters internal thoughts, the conflict they face within themselves and so on. and this novel is doing a pretty good job in that so far. now to the criticism, Just as the sun has it's spots, every rose has its thorns. I'll start with the writing, don't get me wrong, the writing is very good, the style of writing is unique and i love it this way, it focus mainly on one POV, the grammatical error is almost non-existent. but my main problem is that you try to force things. like the conflict within Noah about accepting his new identity, you use the third person "He" to refer to Noah, and then you switch to the First person "I" as a way to show that our main character is having trouble accepting his new identity, and It was repeated in many paragraphs. it's a little bit annoying, but you still a new author, don't take my criticism as hate speech, I'm only saying that because i love the potential this novel have. another thing I don't like, and that is a personal opinion, is the way the Noah is handling his current situation, but i have a feeling it wont last the same very long. HONORABLE MENTIONS: Loreem was an essential part of my speed reading through chapters with her funny GIF s and comments. So far, that's my honest review, Peace✌️

Loreem
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Note: This is an early review, I've only read 20 chapters so far, so there's a chance I'll change my mind about this book at some point in the future. but so far I have had a great experience with it, this is the first book i really follow in this platform, this doesn't not mean I don't read web novel, just not here🤫. the book start slow and continue that way till the point where i am now, this does not mean it's bad or not worth it, the contrary it's very good, it give you the chance to know the character you will follow throughout this journey, it's set's the foundation of the book as a whole, and introduce you to the world you will come to love or hate. and this book does that very well, except for the world building part, but i feel confident in this new author, just from what I have experienced from him so far. Anyway, I'll follow this story and see what happens. and if i change my mind about it, I'll be honest about it. Note: The Porter-man is the greatest character in all fiction.

VirtualHand
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the beginning is very slow and a little bit tiring, but when you past it, it's worth it. highly recommend.

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