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The Black Cloth

作者: NWOK
Eastern Fantasy
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概要

There is a legend in the thirteen continents which is not known by ordinary people or experts only by people who are top of the world. "when the Black Cloth Descend You Will Be Immortal"

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Complete Martial Arts Attributes

The dimensional rifts link the earth to the Xingwu continent. This is the dawn of the martial arts era! I will be useless if I don't practice martial arts? Don't worry, I have a system that allows me to pick up attributes. When other people drop attributes during their training, I can pick them up secretly. Huh? Did you just say that beating up people will make them drop attributes too? In that case... You defeated a sword skill genius. He dropped Enlightenment×2, Sword Talent×1... You've picked them up. Your insights have improved and you've gained a beginner stage sword talent! You defeated a blade skill talent. He dropped Blade Battle Technique×1, Malicious Blade Intent×1... You picked them up and learned a rare blade battle technique! You've also figured out Malicious Blade Intent and have become extremely fierce! You defeated a physique talent. He dropped Physique Scripture×1, Holy-Blood Dominant Physique×1... You picked them up and learned a new top-grade scripture! You are exceptionally lucky to have received the Holy-Blood Dominant Physique. It can change your physique completely and you earned a god-level title 'Endless Health'. Someone killed a powerful star beast and dropped Spiritual Sight×1 and Blank Attribute×60... You picked them up secretly and receive a spiritual eye talent as well as 60 points to add to any of your current attributes! You defeat many opponents in your life. You accidentally kill an innocent devil and split the universe into two when you're practicing your blade at home. You burst the sun with your fist and the world is engulfed in darkness... That's when you realize... You're invincible!

Don't Enter The Jianghu · 東方
4.3
2636 Chs

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il0vecats
il0vecatsLv3il0vecats

Well, I read your book its good for a newbie to write book full mystery and fantasy without boring the readers continue writing and improving mistakes make a person better.

NWOK
NWOK作者NWOK

I will be shamelessly writing the first review. Hi, this my book (original not fanfiction) this book will be a mystery book(like emperor domination) not like other books so it will be hard to write so I will keep 3 chapters per week, for now, please take care of me.

anon88
anon88Lv6anon88

This is a review of the first two chapters. The author is imaginative, but needs help editing. The background of both the main character and the setting are given succinctly. The plot advances from the the main character’s motivation to his first steps down his path. There are numerous run-on sentences. There are also missing words: verbs, articles of speech, and prepositions. The story would benefit from editing.

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