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The Ancestor of a Reincarnated.

作者: LarkayBimmy2
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WebNovel で公開されている、LarkayBimmy2 の作者が書いた The Ancestor of a Reincarnated. の小説を読んでください。Ely Rainvor, a newly appointed knight, returns to his hometown village as a vassal of the feudal lord. The village is situated near the border that separates the Demonic Kingdom from their own. Ely's ...

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Ely Rainvor, a newly appointed knight, returns to his hometown village as a vassal of the feudal lord. The village is situated near the border that separates the Demonic Kingdom from their own. Ely's primary goal is to fortify the village and safeguard it against potential threats. Ely must navigate the intricate web of challenges and mysteries that await him, striving to protect his village and its inhabitants from the looming perils that threaten their very existence.

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Hello to my potential readers. I'll post once a week, but it'll take about 5 months worth of chapters before any action really starts. I'll just try to intrigue people with WORLD BUILDING for those that like slow burning novels.

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After reading 3 chapters, it is possible to single out chapters that are very large in terms of the volume of what is written. But what affects the plot itself is 40% of 100% in the chapter. From 3 chapters about the world and in general about the main character, we learn little other than that he is a knight. Interaction with the world and minor characters seems to be there, but it seems not. There are a couple of points in the story that are really well described. But the dialogues are devoid of any emotions, there is no description of the village. Why describe each character to describe in 1st person whom the hero encounters? If there are several characters in the story, who the readers will watch can be written as a separate chapter and indicate the character through him, as this can confuse the reader. Why release such big chapters? If you break all these 3 chapters into small ones, you get at least 3 chapters each. I recommend the author to reduce the volume of chapters, to think about how and who will be described and from what person, to think over the world in more detail, there is point A, but along the way, the reader should see that this world is alive, like the characters in it. At this point in this story, there are so many questions and so few answers, and with the release of long chapters like these 3 once a month, readers will forget what the plot is about. And the advice "in our world" Spend an analogy with the world that you describe. Added to the collection I hope the author will listen.

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I don't know what you want to achieve, but I guess you should work more on your book, like first three chapters, they are only three...lol...are clearly lifeless. Confusing and I don't know how to describe it...Whatever, if you decide on writing one chapter per month then make the chapter interesting enough to make readers wait.

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