Tensura: Reborn as clayman's Puppet

one of the best Tensura Fanfics I habe ever read and wil continue to read. I hope you won't drop it.🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻

Your story is very impressive keep up the good work, comrade

GOD I HATE TODAY's Tensura NOVELs MADE BY IDIOT FANS..you guys want to know why I hate them Is it because THEY KILL RIMURU THE MC OF THE STORY for stupid reasons or THEY use THE MANACORES like RAPHAEL AND MICHEAL WRONG they never use them for PURPOSE but they become a woman for SxExX and never use for anything .author this novel gold do not kill rimuru for a dumb reason.

Main villain is gu changge?? but as one of the 3 originator true ancestors he was a good man

If you've come for a story then leave because you'll be disappointed; it feels more like a collection of cliffnotes. Like someone telling you a "story" while three pints in. Skipping any details that aren't strictly about pushing the plot forward leaving things feeling rushed with no substance. I can't even tell you how the main character feels about being brought into a new world and I read up to chapter 9.

The premise is very interesting and the story really catches the eye. The only drawback, in my opinion, is the MC, he is a very unpleasant person who I think contributes more as a secondary character than as a main one. I mean, it is a part that gives meaning that turned him into an armor, like Athena's from Saint Seiya.

This is my opinion, feel free to do or react as you like🙂 The writing quality is good but the sequence or flow of the story does is not that good. One moment the MC is doing this then like 3 chapters later it's different. It's like the story or fanfic is just like different arcs that are compressed in a few chapters...