If you've come for a story then leave because you'll be disappointed; it feels more like a collection of cliffnotes. Like someone telling you a "story" while three pints in. Skipping any details that aren't strictly about pushing the plot forward leaving things feeling rushed with no substance. I can't even tell you how the main character feels about being brought into a new world and I read up to chapter 9.
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Sorry, if the fanfiction feels very fast. I'm currently introducing the main character, which is why the pacing might seem fast. I know the MC gains power quickly, and there's limited interaction between characters. I initially planned the introduction for 20 chapters, which I could have extended to 100+ chapters, and I’m not exaggerating. However, if I did that, the real story—which is a crossover involving multiple anime and worlds—would stretch into hundreds of chapters, and I worry the novel might lose its momentum. That's why I decided to limit this fanfiction to around 200 or 250 chapters. As for why the MC shows little reaction to his situation, it's because he’s not like us—he was a soldier who died after failing to protect Earth, which is shown in Chapter 1. There are other reasons too, but revealing them now would be a spoiler. If you're still interested in reading the fanfiction, please wait for the next volume. Lastly, I'm not a professional writer. I just want to share my imagination with others. Thanks for the review🙏🙏🙏, and I promise I'll try to improve.
Even if you want to hurry to the "fun bits" you can't forget that we need to understand the world through the people in it
KingXh_04:Sorry, if the fanfiction feels very fast. I'm currently introducing the main character, which is why the pacing might seem fast. I know the MC gains power quickly, and there's limited interaction between characters. I initially planned the introduction for 20 chapters, which I could have extended to 100+ chapters, and I’m not exaggerating. However, if I did that, the real story—which is a crossover involving multiple anime and worlds—would stretch into hundreds of chapters, and I worry the novel might lose its momentum. That's why I decided to limit this fanfiction to around 200 or 250 chapters. As for why the MC shows little reaction to his situation, it's because he’s not like us—he was a soldier who died after failing to protect Earth, which is shown in Chapter 1. There are other reasons too, but revealing them now would be a spoiler. If you're still interested in reading the fanfiction, please wait for the next volume. Lastly, I'm not a professional writer. I just want to share my imagination with others. Thanks for the review🙏🙏🙏, and I promise I'll try to improve.
I will keep that in mind
Basically_God:Even if you want to hurry to the "fun bits" you can't forget that we need to understand the world through the people in it
