Author announcement

<p>A reader gave me the comment that my main story and my main characters are getting lost in the mix, and I completely agree.<br/><br/> <br/><br/>I have said before in author Note's which you can see at the end of every chapter that I am rewriting, and re-editing parts of my book.<br/><br/> <br/><br/>Simply, because this is my first book, I made some mistakes.<br/><br/>I had planned that my main characters would be dead by now and would have been reborn.<br/><br/>To prevent repeating myself, I kind of skipped over the world building and the troubles of Bai Lang, Mitzuki and Bai Georgi in the early days.<br/><br/> <br/><br/>Every day I have been trying to edit the chapters, but I did a count and to make the story flow the way I want to I will need to add about 25 chapters or it might even be as many or more than 50 chapters before Maritsu's and Gabriel's story arc.<br/><br/> <br/><br/>Writing those chapters on top of my daily updates, on top of my fulltime studies and on top of my fulltime job just isn't an option. Therefore, I am pausing my story for a bit.<br/><br/> <br/><br/>Not for too long I hope that the changes will have been made before the end of February.<br/><br/> <br/><br/>As a writer I hope readers enjoy the world I create, because of changes I think I could make the story better, but that takes time.<br/><br/> <br/><br/>So, if you are reading my story I hope you stick around and wait for my rewrite. Once that is done I will try to go back to daily updates.<br/><br/> <br/><br/>Do know that while Maritsu and Gabriel right now don't seem important they are. Paradise will focus on four groups, our Main Characters, Bai Lang and Mitzuki being the center of it.<br/><br/> <br/><br/>The other groups will be built by Alexis, Bai Georgi, and Maritsu &Gabriel.<br/><br/> <br/><br/>I don't want to spoil more I just wanted to say why their story which doesn't seem relevant definitely will be.<br/><br/> <br/><br/> <br/><br/>So, I hope to see you back when I finish my rewrite. If you do thank you for your patience.<br/><br/> <br/><br/>When I have finished the rewrite, I will change the cover of my book as well…<br/><br/> <br/><br/>I hope you come and enjoy Paradise with me when I return. Do know that comments are a driving force for a writer to continue to write and improve.<br/><br/> <br/><br/>See you all soon!!</p>