I am trying to improve in order to provide better content! (Notice)

Another month begins and in spite of everything, we continue with the novel. I would like to thank all those who constantly support me with this work, I thank you from the bottom of my heart and you don't know how much you motivate me to continue with this. Although I have been writing this novel for more than 9 months, I still think that I have a long way to go to be a good writer and I constantly have doubts about myself. That is why I would like to sincerely ask you, my readers, for your opinion. What do you think of the novel so far? Do you like it? Do you have any ideas to improve the story or the grammatical structure? Does anything bother you? Every comment you leave will help me a lot to bring you a better content, I accept criticism to help me improve. I'm currently experimenting a little bit the POVS area because thanks to the comments of a reader, I realized that we have many points of view that were left in the dark and certainly have their relevance. I would appreciate your help and I will be attentive to your comments. Thanks for everything <3