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Author here! I hope you enjoy this book. For more books of mine, check out The Antagonist's revenge or The Hero will Die. Thank you for reading.

Disclaimer(to avoid complaints and complications): Loi is very weak in his past life. He still has the mentality that he is weak since it has been deeply engraved into his heart. It will take his mind and body a while to finally grasp that he is getting a lot stronger and may subconsciously back off sometimes. His past life age is 32. I wouldn't say that his maturity affects his character very much but instead the decisions he makes. Loi is very selfish in this current life and will do anything to help his family and himself because he knows that kindness only belongs to the strong. But, he is not a monster. Some stupid moments in this story is usually intentional and is not meant to be viewed as a very smart move. In this case, those moments are meant to be either calculative or for the experience. This Fantasy cultivation world operates differently from our world. For example, ways to deal with a spy can differ based on the people responsible. Some might let the spy go due to kindness, which will infuriate readers, while some might be merciless to the core. This Fantasy world do not have any norms when compared to our world and the way things work will be different. Thank you for reading. If you have any more questions, please comment here.

A Fantasy story with a slight mix of Cultivation. The protagonist is likable and not overly arrogant to the point of him being unbearable. Writing quality is in a first-person perspective that captures the protagonist's thoughts and actions. Sentences are understandable and easy to imagine. Worldbuilding: The author thoroughly describes how the world works without making it sound like a documentary. Description of things are also elaborate and not overly committed. Characters: The character's personality is much more vivid, making them seem like actual humans instead of just simply being there for the sake of the story. Pace: An amazing place that isn't too fast and too slow. Exciting fights are placed almost perfectly to spice up the reader. Training isn't too fast nor too slow either and it is obvious that the protagonist faces more difficulty "becoming stronger" as time goes on. Protagonist: Loi Krist, even though he isn't very overpowered and strong, makes up for it with his experience from his veteran past as a combatant and has shown wide knowledge of different magic, creatures and techniques. There are obvious hints of maturity in Loi, one example is when he ignores insults thrown at him or when he actually appreciated the system granted to him. The last point is personally my favourite because I hate protagonist who expects more from their system when they could just be a pebble beside the road without it. Of course, Plot Armour in this case refers to survivability such as strength, luck, wealth, and status. The "Plot Armour" that Loi extracts will be in the form of talents, skills, affinities, etc. Overall an amazing and promising read. I definitely recommend it.

Good plot concept. Writing quality is good. The description is thorough and vivid, the protagonist does things with a reason and is not stupid. Very well done. please continue more thanks.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update]

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Good pace and story development and protagonist have a very nice personality: not overly arrogant and still entertaining. Writing quality is very good and has rarely mistakes. The protagonist uses his head to think and does not completely rely on the system.

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I downloaded webnovel to read this story. The author has a good and simple writing style that I enjoy. What I really enjoy however is that the protagonist actually appreciates the system, unlike all those system comics and novels I read where those protagonists are unsatisfied with what the system gave them. This story protagonist is also very cautious and likeable. Very good indeed.

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