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RickaSatomi
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2022-01-22 15:16

Good pace and story development and protagonist have a very nice personality: not overly arrogant and still entertaining. Writing quality is very good and has rarely mistakes. The protagonist uses his head to think and does not completely rely on the system.

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Background_Char
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A Fantasy story with a slight mix of Cultivation. The protagonist is likable and not overly arrogant to the point of him being unbearable. Writing quality is in a first-person perspective that captures the protagonist's thoughts and actions. Sentences are understandable and easy to imagine. Worldbuilding: The author thoroughly describes how the world works without making it sound like a documentary. Description of things are also elaborate and not overly committed. Characters: The character's personality is much more vivid, making them seem like actual humans instead of just simply being there for the sake of the story. Pace: An amazing place that isn't too fast and too slow. Exciting fights are placed almost perfectly to spice up the reader. Training isn't too fast nor too slow either and it is obvious that the protagonist faces more difficulty "becoming stronger" as time goes on. Protagonist: Loi Krist, even though he isn't very overpowered and strong, makes up for it with his experience from his veteran past as a combatant and has shown wide knowledge of different magic, creatures and techniques. There are obvious hints of maturity in Loi, one example is when he ignores insults thrown at him or when he actually appreciated the system granted to him. The last point is personally my favourite because I hate protagonist who expects more from their system when they could just be a pebble beside the road without it. Of course, Plot Armour in this case refers to survivability such as strength, luck, wealth, and status. The "Plot Armour" that Loi extracts will be in the form of talents, skills, affinities, etc. Overall an amazing and promising read. I definitely recommend it.

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