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Rental Girlfriend - Upgraded Kazuya

Rent a girlfriend / Kanojo Okarishimasu - Kazuya x Chizuru Kazuya took this break up more seriously than what was depicted in the anime. He thought of himself as pathetic, cried multiple times, and always asked himself what he did wrong to Mami for her to dump him? He thought their relationship was going great. Was it his excessive horniness when Mami caught him stealing glances and trying to steal kisses? (That's why Kazuya's horniness will be toned down here contrary to the series) He experienced his first anxiety attack and after a few days of suffering depression, he realizes how devastating and tired his face was upon looking at the mirror. So, he decided to move on. How will he do it? He doesn't know but he will. Notes: As this is a fanfic, I will do my best to follow the plot but there may be minor changes that may affect major arcs later on. Things such as Kazuya working out, getting a new hobby, and even luckily getting a side hustle as a business consultant which is his talent and forte are examples of minor changes I will be introducing in this fanfic. I am also not a native English speaker, and I apologize in advance with how I position my sentences and how I convey the story. After I finished writing this fanfic, hopefully it will give me more experience so I can write new novels in the future. My boss sometimes asks me to do unpaid overtime, but I will do my best and release at least 1-2 chapters a week. I promise I won't drop this fanfic. PS: I do my best to proofread each chapter to ensure everything is in order and plot makes sense. Others: " " this indicates that character is speaking ' ' this indicates that character is speaking from their mind (thinking) [ ] future format during SMS conversations. I did not use this yet early on since Mami blocked Kazuya. Most likely, she also blocked him in SMS or other Messaging apps. ( ) Author notes Sentences in Italic would be memories that have resurfaced like a flashback.

franzz · 都市
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Author Notes #2

Thank you all for your incredible support for this fanfic. I want to make it clear that before I even started writing, I delved deep into the manga, meticulously scrutinizing every possible detail. This includes but not limited to character likes and dislikes, fashion, personality, background, and even date of each chapter.

I went so far as to create a fanfic board, compiling all the notes I gathered up to chapter 106.

Note: My fanfic uploaded in wattpad, has a photo showing that since I couldn't upload any images here.

You may have noticed that I've been releasing chapters daily for the past four days. That's because I had some free time after completing a project at work. However, another one is coming, as for when, I do not know..

While this is a fanfic and I have the freedom to make changes to the story, my main goal has always been to stay true to the original as much as possible. The title itself reflects my intention to improve Kazuya while keeping the story realistic and canon.

However, I must confess that after a gap of three months – due to various challenges like COVID, financial issues, getting married, overtime at work, and even migrating to Canada – some of the details that were once fresh in my mind have faded away.

In short, I have never touched the manga for the last 3 months nor even checked the latest updates.

To bring back those forgotten details, I'd have to re-scrutinize the manga from the very beginning, and that would take a considerable amount of time.

Now I'm faced with a dilemma. Should I continue writing in the present, relying on my notes and trying to remember everything as best I can, even though it's not as effective as it was three months ago?

Or should I take the time to meticulously re-read the manga again from scratch?

The fanfic board I created at that time was intended as a reference, but it does not contain complete details. It would be most effective if I could remember all the details from chapter 1.

I want to make it clear that I'm not asking you readers to vote, but I feel you deserve to know how much your support and time spent on my fanfic truly mean to me. Your presence here brings me immense gratification. You all deserve the very best.