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REBORN: Marriage Of Hell

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What is REBORN: Marriage Of Hell

WebNovel で公開されている、AuthoressChioma の作者が書いた REBORN: Marriage Of Hell の小説を読んでください。Roxana!!" A man in mask said as he danced with her in the palace, Roxana why are you doing this to me huh?? Roxana gritted her teeth and looked deep in his beautiful eyes!" Lord Adrienne I fell in lo...

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Roxana!!" A man in mask said as he danced with her in the palace, Roxana why are you doing this to me huh?? Roxana gritted her teeth and looked deep in his beautiful eyes!" Lord Adrienne I fell in love with you but you killed it Although it was my tribulation, Am aware you knew my tribulation didn't complete and our fate was predestined!". Adrienne I can never Love you again' surely not in this life! Not in this life!" Everywhere went quite for Roxana and Adrienne' Her soft word pierced his soul and cut through him!" The amount of pain he felt was nothing compared to the punishment given to him by his father Lucifer, Roxana said it to him but she felt immense pain and was choking up with tears but gained her poisture. Roxana you can't marry my best friend Ramiel!! I will and be his wife!" I won't let such happen while am alive!" He said looking into her eyes and breathing on her neck. Adrienne I'll fight you to the end" Either way one of us must die". He held her hands to the chest and grabbing her waistline ". Hook line do you really hate me this much???That you can't stand me by your side " he said sadly and felt his inner burn as a tear droplet escaped his eyes. Adrienne I hate you to the core of my being!! Even though am your Dragon and beast.

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Koushik_Ghosh_7567
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.,..............,............................................................................ Great novle ............................ Carry on.......................................................................................... Writing skills will improve with time..................... ..................

Qilinblood
QilinbloodLv3Qilinblood

The novel is good, the thing I liked in this novel is as how the author fluently introduces the characteristics of the characters he introduces and the pacing is also quite good, but there is still room for improvement as first of all author should try to improve the grammatical mistakes he makes in the ch's and sometimes there is a lack of emotional impact from the characters and also this is for the Author --> You have made the paragraphs too long it actually makes confusion when they are together this much so as how I felt it would good if you make them of at least 3 lines and then space, then continue. That's all I wanted to say still you have made a good one

WeebWrites96
WeebWrites96Lv3WeebWrites96

Very well written, the story has great character and plot development. I didn't notice much in grammatical or spelling errors. I love the romance in the story. All in all I highly recommend this series to all book lovers.

Tifala
TifalaLv1Tifala

The novel has a lot of problems, the lack of dialogue highlighting, the plot immediately throws into the thick of events, without explaining anything about the world or the main character. The characters are not particularly worked out, they are not interesting to watch.

LaziestMan
LaziestManLv4LaziestMan

i crossed over with Immortal System . Go and read it i am sure you will like it

Kkomi
KkomiLv11Kkomi

Your book has such a cute cover, and the plot is truly intriguing! I enjoyed how smoothly it flowed into the story. Your creativity and storytelling skills are commendable! Just a little attention to punctuations and paragraphing, and your writing will shine even brighter! Keep going, and keep writing with passion! Looking forward to more chapters and witnessing your talent grow.

Sinadin
SinadinLv3Sinadin

Awesome work Author! Great plot with good writing. Up your updates a little and there you go, you'll be well off 🌚

Patience_Agboola
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ThreyaMidnight
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Hi there! I love your story, it has a lot of potential and could be better in terms of writing style. However, I would like to point out that your work is rather difficult to read because of the lack of "" when characters talk. You can improve your writing with the help of grammar-checking tools like Grammarly. Once you use such tools, I believe your writing will improve a lot!

Edith_Ukamaka
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Nice book I recommend it....Try updating more often and as a novelist I recommend it to lovers of novel out there to read ,review and vote.[img=faceslap][img=exp][img=coins][img=recommend][img=update]

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AuthoressChioma
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Collins_Anagor
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EmpressAje
EmpressAjeLv4EmpressAje

nice story I'm already seeing alot of potential male leads 😅😅but the problem I noticed is the conversation I wish they were like this "my name is" than this, my name isand there are little grammatical errors with little to no punctuation but you're trying

RavenCorella
RavenCorellaLv11RavenCorella

Everyone's already mentioned grammar, so I won't hammer on about how awfully ineligible it is. A few other things stood out to me. 1. Your chapters should be between 1200 to 1500 words on lower average if you ever want to land a contract. It's also what people are used to reading here. Yours are a bit too short. 2. There is too much dialogue for the amount of action you have going on, and it's too cluttered amidst descriptions and narration. 3. Chapter naming: you need to only use the actual name for your chapters, currently they read as Chapter 6: Chapter Six. 'Tis no good. I also recommended some tools that might help you with proofreading. Also, check out the writer's academy on inkstone. It has some very solid guides. Good luck, and don't give up.

Perfect_praize
Perfect_praizeLv3Perfect_praize

This is a very captivating novel I love the story line and the character design. The author has done a great job with the story. I encourage everyone to read this.

Billy_Bags
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It could use some copyediting, it's a little rough to track in spots but otherwise it's an incredibly solid story. Definitely going to follow-up with this one.

Perfect_praize
Perfect_praizeLv3Perfect_praize

This Is an amazing story I love the author’s way of writing

Goodness_OG
Goodness_OGLv3Goodness_OG

I have never read a book as mind blowing and engaging as this. Every new chapter is a new and different and amazing adventure. I have to give it to you author, kudos.

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