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Ragnarök, Eternal Tragedy.

作者: Prince_06
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WebNovel で公開されている、Prince_06 の作者が書いた Ragnarök, Eternal Tragedy. の小説を読んでください。Amari Zanders. An orphan who doesn't have uncos (powers). Has always been looking forward to being part of a family but being a black kid with no uncos people have always looked at him as a curse. Wil...

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Amari Zanders. An orphan who doesn't have uncos (powers). Has always been looking forward to being part of a family but being a black kid with no uncos people have always looked at him as a curse. Will he ever meet his family? or will he die alone.

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LOVE IS WORLD

The love story of two young people This is a story of true love Four years ago I was working in a tailor shop I went to sewing every day and was busy with lessons and work I did not know anything about love. Suddenly a girl was found. She was a hairdresser. Every day when I went to the tailor, she saw me. Weeks passed. He took me and wrote that I love you and he had written my phone number. Three days later, he called me and I realized that I had been in contact with that girl for a while and I was going to school. The exams had started. I have to continue my lesson, but he did not accept and left me with two conditions. Condition 1, kissing me, condition 2: Replying to his messages that I had to accept. In order not to be sad, after a while he became discouraged from the fog and I fell in love with him. It hurt me. He had a relationship with several people. Hope this problem is solved, but it never happened. One day I saw him hand in hand on the street with another person. But I could not do anything. I cried every day, I prayed that it would get better, but it did not work. I was fired from sewing. Every morning I came and sat near their barber shop. I was dying every day for 8 months. I was not feeling well. Well, I had to tell her mother. I sent a letter to her mother. I wrote in the letter. Madam, please call this number. About your daughter. The letter was sent by KS and why. His daughter told me that a person named Sarfaraz wanted to discredit me without calling. And while I wanted to save her from bad people, I wanted to tell her mother that you should take the girl away from here. These people call your daughter bad. Went to America, that girl's name was Sarah Oh my bitter end

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Prince_06作者Prince_06

Yo! It's your author here, I wanted to give an analysis based on the work I've done so far. So far there has been very few moments of action and more focus on the characters and their growth. The world building is okay, and I want to improve on it. The story is inspired by stories like God of War 1,2 and 3, but is won't be the same to be exact, just inspired. I hope you guys enjoy this journey as much as I will.

Prince_06
Prince_06作者Prince_06

On this comment I'll leave a critique, for anyone interested in reading the book. Grammatically it's okay, nothing bad or amazing, just okay. The story development is pretty good, and every character that is introduced during the story plays a major role in the development of the story and characters. The world background is also okay, nothing special about it, could get better during the chapters.

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