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Potion Maker

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What is Potion Maker

WebNovel で公開されている、HeavenShakingPalm9 の作者が書いた Potion Maker の小説を読んでください。This is a story about a young man named Will! While playing his favorite game "Potion Maker" after installing a mod, his computer shorted out.Will then woke up in a new world with the ability to make ...

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This is a story about a young man named Will! While playing his favorite game "Potion Maker" after installing a mod, his computer shorted out. Will then woke up in a new world with the ability to make any potion he wishes! With a system that allows him to gain new abilities, will he be walked on by those stronger? Or will he rise to the top? Release rate: unstable, as my schedule is very tight. Buy me coffee? ko-fi.com/heavensp Please check out my facebook page: https://www.facebook.com/HeavenShakingPalm9/ Or check out my discord: https://discord.gg/M3ejYvV The first volume is available on amazon! https://amzn.to/2NCUlRc If the link doesn't work, I am sure you can find it with the good ol' fashioned manual search ;D

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AN: This story contains mature language and at times extremely graphic content. You have been warned. After a war between angels and demons, humans are nearly extinct due to a targeted attack from the demons. A thousand years later, humans are still on the verge of complete extinction and use their abnormal abilities as "Dismantlers" to help every other creature from dangers that were left behind from the war as well as new dangers. Come the MC, Morden, a 24 year old pure human trained to be a Dismantler from a young age. Despite his lack of talent, his hard work and preparation make him an exceptional hunter. When Morden leaves his village on a hunt, he discovers an incredible power hidden inside of a grand memorial. The power gained, however, is confusing, random, and at times eats away at his sanity. Great strength means distinction, but is it worth the cost of losing his mind? "Can I find a way to revive my people? Should I focus on becoming the best Dismantler in all of history? Maybe become the ruler of a kingdom?" These questions haunt Morden as he learns more about the true nature of his power as well as the hidden truths of his world that only he can find. - AN: I grew tired of reading stories where characters have crazy anime tropes. One guy is so stingy even though he's a millionaire, another doesn't think he's evil but he's just kills people without hesitation making him edgy, etc. I wanted a story where characters were believable and set in a world that was original. The main character acts in ways that a normal person does and the people around him as well. Cringe is something I try to avoid as much as possible and I try to write in a way that won't make you scratch your head and wonder why I used the same word 3 times in one paragraph. I am no published writer and I make mistakes mainly from auto corrections or mistyped. Please have mercy on my poor soul. This world that I created is as original as I could design it to be. The creatures and being found in this world are many that we know and have seen many times before but with my own twist to many of them. Most creatures live in harmony (with exceptions) despite our typical knowledge. No elf vs dwarves rivalry, very few naturally evil races or characters who are trying to ruin the world for the sake of it. I try to have as little relation to our world to give off the feel of immersion, keeping only what is necessary for our understanding (our day length, month, year, the sun, etc.). Keeping with this theme, I try to make original sounding names and places that don't have a strong correlation with what we all know. Thank you all for reading and supporting me!

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DaoistLartuen
DaoistLartuenLv5DaoistLartuen

Oh gosh darn it! I thought it was about the game. Well, I guess I should've read the description my bad. Btw good novel. Some regrets.Some regrets.Some regrets.

GreyFool
GreyFoolLv10GreyFool

I personally enjoy this novel and I would recommend it however it is my opinion so it’s up to you to decide if you enjoy it or not.

Daoistmm
DaoistmmLv10Daoistmm

good (((((((()))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))(((((((((()())()()(()))))((((()))))((())))(((((())())))))))

Epaxx
EpaxxLv6Epaxx

Currently reading the story and the feeling it gives is SLOW PACED!! At chapter 20 and the story has a very slow progress! I'm already skimming it.

HeavenShakingPalm9
HeavenShakingPalm9作者HeavenShakingPalm9

Hello! I am the author of this novel! Here are some things to take note of! The release rate tends to be around 4-5 a week, sometimes it's just three a week if I have real life things or hit a mental block. The beginning chapters have their issues, this is true. The more edited version is on amazon, link is in the novel description (volume 1) I think there is an issue with the title on the ebook, it's off center XD Anyways! A link to my discord is in the novel description, go there so I can give notices on delays or other plans! Potion Maker was initially made on the spur of the moment, it wasn't until Chapter 20ish when I started to plan events on paper before I typed, so be understandable when you run into confusion, the later chapters just get better. I hope you enjoy reading the novel!

IcyPyromaniac
IcyPyromaniacLv4IcyPyromaniac

This review is partly because of me personally not liking his "enemy" surviving airborne poison with the excuse that he was under a pile of bodies, which wouldn't be possible because he would die along with everybody else unless they all piled of top of the boy when the poison was released. Plus setting up a main rival cheapens the plot a bit and finally this novel is about potions and yet after having the ingredients to make a potion that would make him more powerful it's takes 12 chapters for it to happen. Also the powerful girl trapped/sleeping/hurt is way too overused.

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