I was re reading some of the chapters and there was things that seemed kind of to Chinese alike, no racism intended. Am sure you guys know what I'm talking about by saying Chinese.
There was also parts that didn't make sense. Sorry that's on me, I will proof read a extra time from now on. Originally I also wanted to just translate and not put my hands into changing anything as is not my work, but I will from now on, remove some parts, change some parts, add some parts, whatever I see fit.
And if anyone also has anything they will think is suited better for a certain word or paragraph, or whatever, let me know and I might change it.
Also I will be copying and pasting this information to my other translated fan fic, as it faces the same problems, feel free to give that a try to.