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Pietists Undertaking (Dead)

作者: Knossos
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The Unparallel Divine World

A wandering soul in darkness suddenly remembers how it died in his last life. With some regrets and some beautiful memories of his master who died with him in his last life he decided to change his fate and never left his fate decided by the likes of others. He got reincarnated in the young handsome man who is a cultivation genius but due to his master lack of support in early years and his master's death earlier than expected due to injuries he got in between the power struggle of a sect and died due to overwhelming pressure and threats. The soul then reincarnated in this young man body and follow will to keep his master peak and inheritance safe and sound and he will reach the peak of the world so that no-one can take his life and he can live his life in his own way. Later did he realise that he had a cheat system which help him in his journey to reach the apex of the world and coupled with his previous life master inheritance he was sure to reach the legendary Martial Monarch realm . He had to accept disciples and keep completing the mission granted by the system and with his hardworking nature he will soon reach that realm. But little did he know that by accepting disciples his peaceful life will change and he will had to face various difficulties , tribulations and trials in his life. He had experienced the ruthlessness and bitterness of this world where strong prey the weak so he started to develop his mentality as morals in his disciples and making them more determined to reach the top of the world. The change in the mentality and morals from a interoverted nature to dominating nature and various other plots change the living style and general idea of the world of our main character in his journey towards immortality. Introduction - ----------------------- I am not an English speaking native so there might be some general mistakes and grammar mistakes . Hope you don't mind . I will improve as well as increase the daily chapters from 1 to 2 or increase the word count. If you like my writing please support me by reading and sharing the novel with your family and friends. This is not an overpowered MC based story nor the MC is a villian based character. It is a story where MC moves with general trend and neither is too much powerful nor too much powerless . If you are looking for a powerfull OP MC it is not going to happen. So you better change your reading novel to other one. Oh right , later with change in mentality our MC get interested in girls too so wait and watch the plot of the show. Not might being with the biggest Harem but still have some girls around him. Thanks

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My Adonis don't let me down

life is not a bed of roses it's a common saying sometimes we face the twisted situations Same is the case for saleena ... A young girl with the breath taking beauty was running without any sense of stoping No path was clear, under the dim street light she saw a man standing smiling devilishly at her mesmerized by the scene before her but she was taken a back when man smirked at her and said : " you can run but you can't hide darling" In desperate situation what will salleena choose???? Her sister was a lier her father cheated on her mother her brother was in coma for 1 whole year Cheated by her whole family and boyfriend every path seemed vague to her. she died due to her naive behaviour & she cried beacause of her awful faith . she was Beautiful ,Rich ,intelligent than why did this happen to her she asked herself on verge of death " BUT ONLY JUSTICE THAT SHE WAS GIVEN BY LIFE WAS THAT SHE RECARNATED" In past , she could'nt recognise her well wishers and treated them terribly NOW SHE HAS GOT A CHANCE WHAT WILL SHE CHOOSE.. she won't repeat the same mistake she said to herself her eyes were burning with rage and was desperate for her revenge **************************** On the night a beautiful mesmerizing voice can be heard Luhan bent forward and said in husky voice:"dear bunny! I'm hungry" She replied in low voice feeling scared :"then what can I do??? If you're hungry" "because only you've what I want" he said smilingly " Only I have?? :she asked Confusedly Before she can say anything beast pounced upon her without giving her a chance to leave " bunny let's have a beautiful night " He winked at her and continue the unleft task. ******'' '' ' WELL I'M NOT A WRITTER AND JUST DOING THIS FOR FUN ??? CAUTION: PEOPLE WITH ALLERGY TO GRAMMATICAL AND SPELLING MISTKE SOULD READ ON THERE OWN RISK?? Front page doesn't belong to me, it's taken from web no copyright issued

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I Got Infinite Stats

We were overwhelmed by how vast the space behind the stage was, but what made our hearts cringe was the fact that all the slaves were imprisoned inside cages, some were in diminutive cages of their own, others were squashed together in huge prisons that were pounded to the walls. Guards and other people with surprisingly clean clothes were rushing around, tending to the slaves and polishing them to the point that they seem to be shining. Quite a large number of slaves were positioned outside the cages, still binded by shackles but with better clothes and better looks than the imprisoned ones, which indicated that they were the goods to be sold. I clenched my fists, I was determined to release every single one of them with the infinite cash that was bestowed upon my system. The stench waffling through the air was also surprisingly smelling of soap and perfume, with a slight whiff of something cooking. I was glad that the slaves weren't as badly treated as how the rumors had said, though of course it was still categorized as very bad treatment. The anger inside me was starting to flare up, but was then slightly diminished by the fact that I had noticed the slaves weren't skinny and seemed to be in good condition. We went past the soon-to-be-sold slaves and the guards tending them, who looked at us with frowning faces but went back to their work as soon as they saw the VIP passes that I stuck on our clothes. I looked at the face of the slave that the first guard was fussing about on, and I noticed her to be a species of adolescent juvenile female dark elf. Her gaze met mine, it had a hint of despair but also a sense of longing to be free. 

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Yuri_san16
Yuri_san16Lv4Yuri_san16

New reader here, i liked your plot and i have been addisted to it! You deserve moreeeeeee looking forward for more chaps. So interesting to readdddd i love it im liking this genre

midnight_bloom
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I'm only at chapter 4 but I am so liking it. Not into the genre but I have been drawn to the plot and will surely continue reading it. Have saved it in my library. Quite very enjoyable and easy to read too. Interesting.

ILLYAchan
ILLYAchanLv5ILLYAchan

I like the story! At first, it was like the mc is in a game which can see his levels and upgrade skills and will soon turn into an OP character but I like how it turns out he needs to save that town (or it is a town?) and creates his own religion. What a unique one!

Nzoputa
NzoputaLv4Nzoputa

The author has done an exceptionally good work. Quite a few errors I might add, but who am I to judge. The author obviously knows what they're doing. Its a really good novel.

Asphant
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An excellent plot. Three chapters in and I was hooked with the story, the vastness of your vocabulary is commendable, I had times when I needed my handy dictionary to grasp a word. However, there are a few turning off points which incapacitates the readers from immersing in the story. First, is the background building, it is greatly lacking and that alone failed me to imbue myself within the story. Second, is the character design, whilst most of the characters have excellent distinction and rendition. Some are rather forced, making a few scenes quite awkward. That's about it. There were also things such as punctuations, cumbersome sentences and also a few grammar mistakes. But that could be easily fixed with an efficient proofreader, which is yourself. Overall, this is a great read, really liked the pacing in this. although the chapters are too short, it is enjoyable. Keep this up. Goodluck!

NatsumeRikka
NatsumeRikkaLv5NatsumeRikka

Alright. It's a good book. It's certainly unexpected. Cos, history + system = interesting. The world background hasn't been explained as much as I expected, but the characters are great. Just why the change in pov? Also, I know 1k words is the standard length for a chap, but it doesn't hurt to write a bit extra. As for updates, I'm not sure, cause I haven't seen the pattern yet. Overall, I found the storyline a lot more interesting than normal system ones.

Sapphirechelsea237
Sapphirechelsea237Lv4Sapphirechelsea237

The characterization is done very well and detailing is also perfect! Writing is good too! Overall It's great! Keep up the good work author! :)

idroppedmyhat
idroppedmyhatLv1idroppedmyhat

The author has not delved into the world to much, not very creative world background. But everything else is great! The characterization is awesome, the story development is awesome the updates are awesome and the writing quality... You guessed it, awesome! I like the idea of an mc starting a church and purging the rest of the city if they don't listen, sounds kinda badass. Mc has system, he is chosen by a god, etc etc. Good book.

Lizabelle88
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I give this novel 5 start review because the Author took time to elaborate the story of Jordi in a clear detailed way. Grammar is good. The Story plot is fantastic! The novel needs wide and active imagination to portray such world different from ours and the Author gave all his best! He got the talent for awesome story telling! Will Jordi became a powerful Mage or just a wise preacher beloved by many of his followers or he will succeeed in both? Let the Author take your imagination into another time ...space and beyond!

PeachyPearl
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First thing it was a catchy one... This world was. And the way you explained your world was self descriptive. Nice work.... Keep it up author.

veinglory
veingloryLv4veinglory

Kind of slow so far. Because the character starts as a blank slate and the world so far is generic fantasy world — I guess it depends on where things go from here?

MyCharacterLeads
MyCharacterLeadsLv5MyCharacterLeads

Thumb's up!👍👍 At first I thought, 'woah, a story with history world.' But, then, system pop up.. 'you got me there.' This novel had properly introduce the character, his purpose in general.. The words of wisdom caught me in... (Hell yah! I got myself a dictionary just to understand some unfamiliar words) *scratching my head* The plot was cool.. (I love reading about angels and gods/goddesses) There's just a typos errors, maybe.. the use of quotation marks.. Keep up the good work!

DriftingCloud123
DriftingCloud123Lv5DriftingCloud123

Its only seven chapters long so I can't say much. It's an interesting read if you are a fan of Litrpg or stories with game elements, you should check it out.

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The mc is trash, he gets a system and wants to save the world yaddayadda who gives an honest ****? But i'll hand it to op, writing not to bad...

CocknBalls
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Keep on pumping them chaps out bro. There is a word count, hmm, havent hit it yet? How about now... Not quite there yet. This should do it.

Knossos
Knossos作者Knossos

As I am a shameless man, I have given this novel a 5.0 rating. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ There is a word count and i do have to write about this book. In my opinion this book is so amazing. I can't seem to stop re-reading the chapters. It feels as if I take part in something greater than even myself when I read these words.

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