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Phoenix's flame

作者: Annisax
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What is Phoenix's flame

WebNovel で公開されている、Annisax の作者が書いた Phoenix's flame の小説を読んでください。Only 17+ are allowed. Read at your own risk. Mature and sexual scenes are included. Aurielle Reddens, the rightful heiress of Reddens incorporations, loses her parents at the age of 7, unaware of the ...

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Only 17+ are allowed. Read at your own risk. Mature and sexual scenes are included. Aurielle Reddens, the rightful heiress of Reddens incorporations, loses her parents at the age of 7, unaware of the true cause of their demise. She shuts love out of her life in fear of being hurt. However the new guy in her class keeps getting close to her for some reason. Will she be able to break down her walls and fall in love. Cam she take her rightful position as the heiress in a den full of lions waiting to tear her apart? This is my very first novel and I know it might be imperfect but please support and enjoy the story.

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What if the man that you love is a Dragon?! Meet Rebecca Willow and Elias Flames. Rebecca is not your typical lady. From the tender age of seven, she has been in plenty of court affairs protecting the people of Belfare, fighting in tournaments showing off her skills with the sword, and dreaming of a world where dragons flew in the sky. Elias is the Prince of Belfare and, he has a secret. He befriended Rebecca because, unlike every other woman who wants status, she creates it herself. She is his only friend that he can truly rely on and one that helps secure his throne. The fate of the Dragons relies on the shoulders of both Elias and Rebecca at young ages, although they don't realize it until Rebecca is kidnapped from Belfare to meet the Elder Dragon. Their friendship starts off rocky but eventually blossoms into an unbreakable bond full of trust and admiration. Later on, he shares his secret and proposes to the one he loves. Excerpt: Rebecca [ "Your Majesty, if I may?" I asked and, he waved his hand, silencing the room. I panicked slightly but regained my courage. He nodded and, I looked to the council leader, who sneered. "I have a suggestion about solving the high crime rates. It is not the high class that suffers the high crime rates, however the working class. It's their businesses that are bring robbed and, it is their families that are in danger." I glared at a council member as he made a move to interrupt. "I say that you can send more soldiers to patrol the streets, day and night. Yes, I am aware that there will be a need for soldiers, so pull a list of names that need to serve their time. And for the businesses, you should pay them for their troubles. At least until the crime rates decrease-" a cough echoed in the room, the council leader looked down on me as a child. "Who says the King shall listen to a woman, much less, a child." He paused as he let the words sink in. There were mutters around the room. "It's normal that crime is high. What do you mean to pay the business that is suffering? Our high class is suffering because they can't do business properly." He paused and, I took that moment to stifle his pride. "You're right. Why should a King listen to this ideal? However, as a citizen of the Country of Belfare, I have a right to come to His Majesty. And Councillor, is it not the working class that grows our economy? "For our country to prosper, our businesses should be protected and have trust in the government. Don't you think?" I asked the question and the Councillor opened and closed his mouth like a fish out of water.] Excerpt: Elias [ "They were bold to hurt both Rebecca and me. It's something I can't forgive or forget easily." I could feel those deep green eyes staring, and when I met them, they were glossy. "How is she coping?" He asked, and I let out a sigh, 'if only she had the patience to understand that recovering takes time.' I thought to myself. "She's... coping, although, I can tell it's killing her, to not pick up a blade. That was a low move of that man." I growled, and the King just nodded his head. "Why don't you heal her?" He asked and, I looked away from his probing eyes. I wanted to help her, but I haven't had a teacher thus, I had little control over my powers. "I wish I had someone to speak to. Humans have plenty of resources plus, they don't have to hide their powers and worry about hurting someone. My kind is so close to extinction, it's painful." A couple of tears trailed down, and I flinched when a drop landed on the back of my hand. "They're not dead." My father's voice sounded stern as he looked at the portrait. I knitted my brows together, 'Those dragons have been dead for about a century and a half.' I looked between the picture and father, noticing there was sadness etched in his features.] Read on to embark on these youngster's journeys, which blossom from friendship to love, with the blessings of the dragons. *Cover from Google*

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REBIRTH FROM ASHES : The comeback

Sophia Bennett, betrayed by her husband and step-sister, faced a gruesome end—burned alive with her unborn child. But fate grants her a second chance. Reborn back to when it all began, Sophia now have the chance to rewrite her tragic story. Haunted by memories of the past life, She refuses to let death quench her hatred and regret. Instead, fueled by vengeance. Reborn at the most critical moment that will change her life, “the arranged marriage with the richest and handsome bachelor Alexander Brooks” which she escaped from in her previous life. Will Sophia get married and destroy Olivia's path to riches? Or finds herself entangled with Alexander Brooks. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ “ Are you that desperate to secure the position of “Mrs Brooks” that you'll shamelessly throw yourself at me”? Alexander asks, his voice laced with contempt, his deeps eyes looking at the woman squirming under him. His eyes trails her curvy body as his right hand squeeze the soft mound on her chest, he thought he'd find her touch disgusting but his body couldn't help but react to her and he can barely control his actions. “Ummmm” Sophia moans to his touch “ p-please” she murmurs shakingly, her eyes clouded as she rubs her hot and soft body against him. She feels hot all over and couldn't help groping his body to find relief. Loosing all restraint, Alexander leans to her ear, biting it and whispers huskily “since you're so eager, then don't blame me for being unrestrained”. He sucks her neck, bites down, “ahhhh ummmm” Sophia squirms in bliss. His hand roams her soft body, his head leaves her neck as he kiss his way down to her collarbone and down to her twin peaks. He latches unto one of her breasts, sucks and swirls his tongue round her erect nipple. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ “Rebirth from Ashes” weaves love, betrayal, redemption, and new beginnings into a captivating narrative.

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TsukasaFrier
TsukasaFrierLv3TsukasaFrier

I love your writing style, its easy to read and enjoyable. As for the plot, the story still in beginning stage so its difficult to give honest review but I think the potential is there. The pacing is good as well!

mina_jinhoo
mina_jinhooLv2mina_jinhoo

Even though this story has only about 5 chapters it has already captured my interest.The synopsis alone captured my attention and the first chapter was really interesting. The author has a very interesting idea wile writing this book. The amount of creativity in the book was perfect and the language and pronunciation was on spot. keep up the great work

femme_fatale
femme_fataleLv1femme_fatale

The story is still in its early stages but I know it's going to be big. It advances interestingly. I would like to suggest that you use "...." for dialogues. It would be easier to read. Overall the story seems really great! Keep up the great work author!

sleepingpeacefully
sleepingpeacefullyLv3sleepingpeacefully

Loved it ,story and writing style is great and loved it so far. Looking forward for more, Keep it up author.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Adam_Aksara
Adam_AksaraLv3Adam_Aksara

"Phoenix's Flame" is a captivating teen webnovel that hooks you from the start. The narrative seamlessly blends coming-of-age themes with fantasy elements, resulting in a uniquely riveting tale. The protagonist's journey, much like a phoenix rising, is filled with challenges and growth, offering readers an inspiring narrative. The plot twists are well-executed, and the author's vibrant storytelling brings the world to life. Consistent updates and the author's engagement with readers add to the charm. "Phoenix's Flame" is truly a brilliant, five-star read that resonates with the teen spirit.

Ninestar619_5803
Ninestar619_5803Lv4Ninestar619_5803

Of all the elements of the story, the writing style was the best... why? cause it makes u feel like u r watching a series rather than reading a fine online book. This book is great and easily flowing. Good job, author

Theothegiant
TheothegiantLv3Theothegiant

though this story has only about 5 chapters I'm very intrigued by it. The synopsis alone made me want to dive into this book and the first chapter was really interesting. language and pronunciation had no problems at all! keep up!

Kkomi
KkomiLv11Kkomi

Your writing style is absolutely wonderful! It feels so natural and easy to read. I love how fast-paced it is; it keeps me engaged, and I never get bored in any of the chapters. While there may be some small punctuation errors, it's still a joy diving into your story.

ikigai_yugen
ikigai_yugenLv2ikigai_yugen

Right off the bat, the FL is utterly hilarious 🤣 I honestly couldn't stop laughing after reading the first chapter! The plot seems interesting and a few improvements in punctuation and grammar could make this book pretty hard to put down ^.^ Great job Author ( •̀ ω •́ )✧

First_Flame
First_FlameLv3First_Flame

4.6 for me, Sorry I'm not the romantic type of guy so I'll say it from a single person point of view (sad single life) The story is interesting, thou a little faced paced, the characters and well written and the setting in great, the dialogue sometime overlap and there are some grammatical mistakes which we all make (Especially me as English is not my first language) But there is improvement as the story progresses, so keep going and one more thing, the chapters are too short, lol. People need sauce so don't deny them of this privilege.

Villain_Rai
Villain_RaiLv2Villain_Rai

The story is great and all and I also liked the way you used English so clearly , honestly the way of you utilizing English makes me jealous because I am not good at that .The story was too short , this is only my opinion but if the chapter 1 - 4 had been a single chapter since they takes place in class , the chapter would not only be long enough for the readers to be engrossed but also had been a complete episode .I want to write many things but I won't . if you don't mind me then can you send me your Facebook account or something like that where I can talk to you in private chat or something like that ?after all , getting to know another author is extremely advantageous to an author like us .I will be waiting for your id account , I hope you will send it to me .[img=recommend][img=recommend]

ZenoShin
ZenoShinLv2ZenoShin

Heys guys i'm being forced to review here haha, joke aside. The plot good for me, although i'm not into romance genre, i still find it entertaining. The grammar is good and the curent development of the characters are ok. Wish your book luck!

Shadow_Library_
Shadow_Library_Lv4Shadow_Library_

the story is interesting and a little faced paced, the characters and well written and the setting in great, the dialogue sometime overlap but I noticed that they improve later overall keep it up and good luck

de_writer
de_writerLv3de_writer

Quite an interesting story. I feel there's a lot of potential in the plot however grammar made it a little hard to read. Dialogue was also a bit of a mess and it was difficult to know who was talking and what they were saying. Descriptions were mostly okay as were the characters. The only thing was when one of the mc's classmates were describing her, she sounded a little like a Mary Sue. Not sure if this is the authors intentions but if it is hopefully the story will be done nicely. Otherwise great job author. You have a great story here that with a little work could be a masterpiece.

redlady
redladyLv1redlady

As I previously said that the book is great , I want to prize the author for the good writing style that is easy to understand and catchy. Great job so far ! We want more !

Moonlee_xx
Moonlee_xxLv2Moonlee_xx

I really love this story! There’s even a side couple to support! I will definitely be coming back to this! Looking forward to the next chapters! Keep up the great work Author! 💪

Sinadin
SinadinLv3Sinadin

Love your writing style and the plot is amazing! This work has great potential according to me and I can't wait to read more! Please continue and keep up the good work Author!

ThreyaMidnight
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ForerunnerOfSky
ForerunnerOfSkyLv3ForerunnerOfSky

Good pacing and premise, with solid writing to back it up. Though the chapters are pretty short, the author tells you what you need to know. Only nitpick is sometimes the dialogue comes off as unorganic lots of potential though for growth as it’s only the early chapers

Grandmasters
GrandmastersLv3Grandmasters

Nice going, I love the descriptions and narrations. Also the story is engaging. Grammar wise, you passed. It was a good novel nonetheless [img=recommend]

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