ZenoShin

Thanks for the reminder, I'll keep it in mind

I will try cause someone also said that too much info dumps will not make this better

Sorry man if it's not up to tour taste cause I'm a fan of cultivation so i made this. And i will tske note of tour suggestion

Thanks you!

Your story is still in early stage so i won't say much. I just want to say you should improve character development and plot. Overall, good potential!

Good plot! I also like how you tell the story. You must govus on plot and character development cause that is the strong pints of your novel.

Good romance for me. It has nice plot and good character development. Just make sure to properly develop your character cause its this book most strong point!

Good book but definitely needs improvement. Specially world building and chatacter development. Hut nuways it's still good..................................

Well as you know, cultivation is a broken system but definitely takes time

Good one but need improvement. Specially, character development and plot. Improve grammar too cause good grammar is always the best. Keep up the good work.