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Overturning Fate (~A Journey of a Lifetime~)

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WebNovel で公開されている、ExodusGaming555 の作者が書いた Overturning Fate (~A Journey of a Lifetime~) の小説を読んでください。~~Personal Tags~~(currently on hiatus)#Weak_to_strong#Magic_world#Demi-human mc-------------------------------++------------------------------A journey always started with a single step but as you ste...

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~~Personal Tags~~(currently on hiatus) #Weak_to_strong #Magic_world #Demi-human mc -------------------------------++------------------------------ A journey always started with a single step but as you step further and further never-ending tides will push against you, stopping and straying you from your path. Those who push against the tide with all of their might and will walk in the path of the strong. Those who played the tides and making it push you further with their mind and thought is the path of the wise. Only those who walked both paths will truly become a legend, walking a path they have taken with no regrets. Join Valin journey. A journey that will last for a lifetime yet most will never treads. "I shall overturn fate if it's against me." -------------------------------++--------------------------------- Hello, the author here. this is technically my first real novel. I'm not a native in English (but I'm quite great at it) and I'm using Grammarly keyboard and whatever knowledge of English I have to type in my phone lol. I'm editing this my self+grammarly so don't expect a truly high-quality novel (also because writing novel mobile is 10x harder than on a computer) but at least try reading before anyone judges me lol. P.s. if you like what you see pls support this novel by giving comments, rating, review, and power stones. , the most important thing is for you guys to enjoy~. Novel cover copyright is not my own pls comment on my latest chapter if you(owner of the picture) want to take it down.

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The serene day in Mondstadt begins with Klee's usual antics, her eyes sparkling with mischief, hands fiddling with her beloved Jumpy Dumpty. The city, a haven of peace and beauty, buzzes with the day's tranquility, unaware of the looming shadow. Suddenly, the sky darkens. A formidable, unknown enemy descends upon the city. Chaos erupts. Explosions rattle the once peaceful streets, and screams slice through the air. Mondstadt, known for its freedom and breezes, now trembles under an unforeseen siege. Klee, amidst the pandemonium, stands wide-eyed but resolute. Her usual playground of laughter and adventure transforms into a battlefield. With her heart pounding in her chest, she grips Jumpy Dumpty tighter, a determined glint in her eyes. This is no longer a game. The enemies, merciless and cold, bring a terror Mondstadt has never seen. They seek to overthrow the city, to shatter its spirit. Klee, though young, feels the weight of her city's peril deep in her bones. She knows she must act. Amidst the chaos, Klee encounters allies, unexpected and brave. Together, they weave through the city's alleyways, a symphony of clashing guns, flying stray bullets and fiery explosions echoing around them. Each step is a dance with danger, each breath a moment closer to either victory or defeat. The bond among them strengthens with each passing second, their determination fueled by the love for their city. Klee, with her explosive prowess, becomes a beacon of hope, her fiery spirit igniting courage in the hearts of her comrades. But the road is fraught with peril. The enemy's power is overwhelming, their motives as dark as the night. Klee and her allies face trials that test their courage, their strength, and their bonds. Trust is their shield, and bravery their sword. As the battle for Mondstadt rages, Klee finds herself facing not just the physical adversaries, but her own fears. The responsibility weighs heavily on her young shoulders, each decision a potential spark for victory or catastrophe. In this high-stakes game of survival and protection, Klee's journey intertwines with heart-pounding action, gripping drama, and the undying spirit of heroism. Will she be able to save Mondstadt from the clutches of this formidable enemy? Or will the city's light be extinguished under the shadow of this unforeseen threat? In the end, it's a story of courage, friendship, and the unyielding spirit of a hero, all seen through the eyes of a young girl whose love for her city burns as fiercely as her explosives. The fate of Mondstadt hangs in the balance, and Klee's journey is just beginning.

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ExodusGaming555
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Shameless 5-star review here. ~Author here~ Hello everyone, I welcome you all to the world I've built. Forgive me if there's any mistakes I've made as I'm writing this mobile( it's so hard doing it mobile) and with the help of Grammarly keyboard. Writing quality is a bit bad as I'm not an English native (at least I'm quite good in it). Pls rate, review, and comment if you like this novel 😍

VateRise
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Right. Not that many mistakes, and I can see you are editing stuff. This is good, but I still suggest that you pay attention to word "seems". You used it a lot in the beginning chapters. As for the story? Yea I assume he is or will be OP. Not that I would give you bad review due to that, but it is overused. Especially the system stuff. I personally would prefer if he fared for himself without that system. Now he will have everything handed to him. Story has potential, if the author makes it unique. Besides that, yea give it a try if you are into system stuff.

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The_Senyorita
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Nicely done I say so my self keep up the good work. I'm just hoping for a faster update. 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁

Mavislin11
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The school resemblance is great, but the writing quality needs a bit more of a push. The descriptions are quite a lot, sometimes you don't have be to specific. Don't tell, show applies here. Overall hoping to see more.

Soula_na
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Lovelypfp
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My cup of tea. Waiting for you to come back and continue writing. Hope you get over your writer's block. ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Gourmet_DAO
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The beginning is similar to the quote of Laozi - the road to a thousand Lee, begins with one step. Or, as the Americans say - the road, overpowering, walking. Catching the vines - for some reason, I remembered the image of Tarzan)) In Milarka what eyes? Blue? For some reason, the main character, paid attention to the color of the eyes, and the color of the younger brother are ignored? What does an eye mean? Strength, dexterity, presence or absence of magic? Apparently there is potential ... The author of success, when there will be more chapters, the author does not forget to send an announcement, then there will be comments respectfully

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