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Overturning Fate (~A Journey of a Lifetime~)

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WebNovel で公開されている、ExodusGaming555 の作者が書いた Overturning Fate (~A Journey of a Lifetime~) の小説を読んでください。~~Personal Tags~~(currently on hiatus)#Weak_to_strong#Magic_world#Demi-human mc-------------------------------++------------------------------A journey always started with a single step but as you ste...

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~~Personal Tags~~(currently on hiatus) #Weak_to_strong #Magic_world #Demi-human mc -------------------------------++------------------------------ A journey always started with a single step but as you step further and further never-ending tides will push against you, stopping and straying you from your path. Those who push against the tide with all of their might and will walk in the path of the strong. Those who played the tides and making it push you further with their mind and thought is the path of the wise. Only those who walked both paths will truly become a legend, walking a path they have taken with no regrets. Join Valin journey. A journey that will last for a lifetime yet most will never treads. "I shall overturn fate if it's against me." -------------------------------++--------------------------------- Hello, the author here. this is technically my first real novel. I'm not a native in English (but I'm quite great at it) and I'm using Grammarly keyboard and whatever knowledge of English I have to type in my phone lol. I'm editing this my self+grammarly so don't expect a truly high-quality novel (also because writing novel mobile is 10x harder than on a computer) but at least try reading before anyone judges me lol. P.s. if you like what you see pls support this novel by giving comments, rating, review, and power stones. , the most important thing is for you guys to enjoy~. Novel cover copyright is not my own pls comment on my latest chapter if you(owner of the picture) want to take it down.

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ExodusGaming555
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Shameless 5-star review here. ~Author here~ Hello everyone, I welcome you all to the world I've built. Forgive me if there's any mistakes I've made as I'm writing this mobile( it's so hard doing it mobile) and with the help of Grammarly keyboard. Writing quality is a bit bad as I'm not an English native (at least I'm quite good in it). Pls rate, review, and comment if you like this novel 😍

VateRise
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Right. Not that many mistakes, and I can see you are editing stuff. This is good, but I still suggest that you pay attention to word "seems". You used it a lot in the beginning chapters. As for the story? Yea I assume he is or will be OP. Not that I would give you bad review due to that, but it is overused. Especially the system stuff. I personally would prefer if he fared for himself without that system. Now he will have everything handed to him. Story has potential, if the author makes it unique. Besides that, yea give it a try if you are into system stuff.

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The_Senyorita
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Nicely done I say so my self keep up the good work. I'm just hoping for a faster update. 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁

Mavislin11
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The school resemblance is great, but the writing quality needs a bit more of a push. The descriptions are quite a lot, sometimes you don't have be to specific. Don't tell, show applies here. Overall hoping to see more.

Soula_na
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Lovelypfp
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My cup of tea. Waiting for you to come back and continue writing. Hope you get over your writer's block. ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Gourmet_DAO
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The beginning is similar to the quote of Laozi - the road to a thousand Lee, begins with one step. Or, as the Americans say - the road, overpowering, walking. Catching the vines - for some reason, I remembered the image of Tarzan)) In Milarka what eyes? Blue? For some reason, the main character, paid attention to the color of the eyes, and the color of the younger brother are ignored? What does an eye mean? Strength, dexterity, presence or absence of magic? Apparently there is potential ... The author of success, when there will be more chapters, the author does not forget to send an announcement, then there will be comments respectfully

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