One Piece: Starting by Refusing Shanks

Feel free to ask me anything, and I'll do my best to answer with what I know about this book. If you notice anything lacking in the quality of the novel, please let me know. I've tried to translate as free of Chinese elements as possible and have changed the Chinese names to fit One Piece characters. I'm always looking to improve, so if you spot any issues with the translation, I'd appreciate your feedback to help me enhance my skills. For this whole week, you'll receive chapters every two hours. I hope you'll support me so I can continue releasing two chapters every two hours next week as well.

From story to plot , everything is quite well written . But everything good with the story gets pretty much forgotten with the mc. He's not even a generic one. He's just a robot with no dreams or ambitions. His interactions are incredibly bland. And the system just slaves him around . That's another negative point of the story.

well to be honest i found it really monotonous the mc only cares about alcohol and the sign-in also feel like he has no personality whatsoever and every character he meets tries to recruit him. besides those it is good if you don't have any other fanfic to read.

mc is like a depressed overpowerd teenager, and everyone around him acts as a conserned mom trying and failing to break him out of his depression. anyways good story, I hope it continues

The translator is doing a good job at making the story more appetizing but it's soooo boring I have read a lot of Chinese fanfics but this one take the cake for the most monotone,boring,repeating story ever.whenever he goes to a new location all the npcs have the same dialog and reactions.

This is really good. Mc is a traveller with a system. His system makes him interact with one piece characters to get rewards. In a way he is like Hawkeye - traveling alone and drinking alcohol (sake).

O MC é praticamente um robô sem personalidade nenhuma e escravo do sistema,tudo se resume a ele viajando para fazer login e beber sem nenhum propósito real,simplesmente pq o sistema manda

The author does a good job with the writing and that is what hurts the most, the Chinese do not know how to make a good one piece plot, in short he is just a depressive child who one day woke up the system and began to obey. religiously, the protagonist has no charisma or self-esteem, he is just a robot that obeys the system, the interactions are so low and forced.

i shall read this fanfic with great intrest

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the translator is amazing but the history is trash Mc is complete apathetic have no goal or objective i don't know why such good translator is wasting his time with this kind of novel

This story is interisting and all, but I getting tired of the MC personality, in the beginning was funny but now his bored attitude is getting annoying. At least have some sense of wonder, the dude travel to a fictional universe full of fantastical shit and call himself a traveler but in no point he seems to be enjoying any of it, he is just in autopilot going where the system point him to, he barely seems to care for the power ups he is getting. I not even saying that he should be a happy-go-lucky guy just give him a goal or something, show that he is traveler because he want to explore and see the wonders of the one piece world. Ok, final thing, please have any bartender deny him a drink, at least one person in the world should tell the 10 year old kid "no" when he enter a bar alone asking for booze.

Heres how the story goes: MC gets to new island, signs in, power up, throw in a popular character, popular character gets surprised at his potential, tries to recruit him and gets rejected. Repeat. Same thing at least till chapter 40, repeated like 5 times. MC feels like an edgy teenager.

Personally, in my opinion, this story is not bad with the MC focusing on his goal of completing the task given, plus writing that suits me

a well translated novel but a poor choice of a story, you can switch the mc with a stone, and i think it would be more interesting. hope to read your next novel 👍

This fanfic in a nutshell .

قصة ممتازة شخصية البطل فخمة تفاعله مع شخصيات القصة جيد جدا و قد ترك اثره على الشخصيات ارجو ان إستمر في كتابة الرواية و لا تسقطها يمكنك محاولة إضافة شخصياتك الخاصة القصة و جعل البطل يسافر الى جزر لم تظهر في القصة من حين لاخر

The character is strong because there is a system, but there is no content describing training at all. There is no goal to become stronger. Just a journey to log in, without a goal. The main character is made to be a child but likes to drink. In his previous life, he was only 17 years old. He did it to make other characters look down on him and then be shocked that he can drink well. It's nonsense. Another thing is that the character's nature of not liking to respond and doing the same as other people is annoying. But that's what's annoying. If there wasn't a strong system, it would have died long ago in the One Piece world. This story can be read continuously, but if it's not fun, it's considered bad. I hope it will be improved to be better.

I think everything is perfect just not the mc as he is like a machine with really no emotion and if he does something then the author has to take some time to explain why he felt doing that and to be honest without his system he is literally a character not even worth mentioning in the story......like he does not even train or something everything he gets at a plate from the system And the side character i think this translation is only for them not the mc as he does nothing and make his own double standards so yeah the story is pretty perfect without this annoying mc

It's a very good fanfic, but what I don't like about it is that the main character lacks personality, very cold and insensitive, as if nothing matters, which makes the story feel bland.