Chapter 9: the beautiful Hatake

Hokage's office

'Hokage looking through the crystal ball'

Hokage: "hohoho it looks like we have another genius"

Danzo: "what's so funny hiruzen"

Hokage: " shut up Danzo mind your own business "

Danzo: "tsk"

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While headed home after the fight with Sasuke I went brought weights for my legs and arms. I brought two each 40 kg weights for my legs and two each 20 kg weights for my arms.

The training for taijutsu has been quick with the help of the mystic palm technique but I have reached a bottleneck and that's why I am

Wearing weights to help my body break through my bottleneck.

But today I'm going to train with mum to teach me a wind Jutsu. while thinking I was already home.

Mum:" where we're you the training should have started 10 minutes ago"

Ren:" sorry mum I had to do something"

Mum:" ok but you have to make up for the time by working even harder"

Ren:" ok"

Mum:" alright let's go train"

Arriving at the training field which I call my huge backyard. I stand near mum.

Mum" alright the jutsu that I'm going to teach you is Wind Release: Great Breakthrough"

Ren:" Sugoi mum that's amazing if I use the wind Release: Great Breakthrough can't I combine it with the great fireball jutsu to make it bigger and stronger?

Mum:" yes but you need to be fast when casting the two Jutsu and you need more chakra two perform both jutsu"

So if I minimize how much I use hand signs and how much I use chakra for both jutsu then I will be able to cast it and it will increase the size and the output of the fire. So I need to control chakra so I can use less chakra when using jutsu this will help with my chakra capacity.

Mum:" alright I will show you how to mold and do the hands signs and then I going to go finish dinner before your dad comes home"

Ren:" ok kasan"

After 15 minutes which is half the time it took me to learn the fireball jutsu. but I don't know why the wind jutsu is easy to do if I keep training every day I will master it in a few days anyway I have to also train to minimize how many hand signs and chakra I am using for both jutsu.

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At the academy walking in the corridor, I heard someone shouting my name.

Hana: "Ren! It's me, Hana Hatake"

Eh, who is this again I can't remember her and her last name is familiar wait hatake like Hatake Kakashi.

Ren: "eh eh "

Hana:" did you forget about me"

Eh damn, I don't want to be a jerk and say I don't remember her. But who is she again I feel like I know her name.

'ren holding his head trying to remember

Ren:" Hana, Hana, Hana oh yeah the one with beautiful white hair and pretty blue eyes.

'Ren smashed his fist on his palm remembering who she is '

Hana: 'blush' "eh eh! yea yeah that's me I think"

'Hana handed over an envelope'

Hana:" he her here my birthday is on Sunday I hope you can come!" saying it while stuttering.

'Hana running off while blushing'

Ren:" wait I have!"

damn, she's gone I was going to say my birthday is on Sunday as well. Oh well, I won't go anyways I was going to train on my birthday anyway.

Naruto, Shikamaru, choji, and Kiba:" hehheh hehhehehhehe!!

Ren:" why are you guys laughing and why are you hiding behind the wall"

'Naruto approaching Ren'

Naruto:" hehe was she your this"

'naruto put out his pinky'

Ren:" what no I barely know her she invited me to her birthday but I'm not going because I'm training on that day"

Shikamaru:" hahhh why do I have dense friends"

Ren:" what are guys talking about my birthday is on the same day but I am going to do training.

'All looking at ren'

All of them:" your dens!"

Ren:" ok stop joking around and let's go to class"

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In class

Ino:" Shikamaru what's wrong you look even more worn out than usual"

Shikamaru:" it's just ren he is dense and it's depressing to know"

'Naruto butts in'

Naruto:" yeah he got asked out by a beautiful girl"

Everyone:" ehhhhhhhhh!"

Ino and sakura:" explain in detail now!!"

'Naruto getting scared'

Naruto:" well well you should ask ren about it"

That damn blond chibi betrayed me I thought that we were friends no we were friends now we are enemies.

'all the girls surrounding ren asking him questions'

Sakura and ino:" what is her name and how does she look"

Note: going to change hanas last name to hatake.

Ren: "Hana Hatake and she has beautiful white hair and pretty blue eyes"

Ino:" you're not talking about that Hana Hatake who is the most beautiful girl in the school and she is from the hatake clan."

'All girls gasping'

Wait Hatake is that the same clan as Kakashi but I never heard from her in any of the manga and anime so she might have died.

Ren:" yeah I think so"

'All the girls ask ren many questions'

I think I understand you Sasuke these girls are always loud and annoying.

Sasuke:' why do I get the feeling that someone understands me na must be my imagination because I am alone and my only purpose is to be an avenger' said the sausage emo.

After finally a long day at school I can go home and train.

At home in the backyard

Mum:" what's wrong ren you look exhausted, what happens"

Ren:" the most beautiful girl asked me to go to her birthday on Sunday the same day as my birthday but I was going to spend my birthday training all day"

'Mum hits ren on the head'

Ren:" owww mum what was that for!"

Mum:" because your idiot just like your father and you're going to this girl's birthday!"

Ren: "what mum I don't want to tho"

Mum:" if you go I'll buy you that chakra blade you wanted"

Ren:" what I thought you were not going to get me one"

Mum:" call it an investment"

I don't understand but I'm getting a chakra blade.

Mum:" alright because you made me angry I'm going double you're training"

Ren:" yes!! Thank you, mum I love you"

Mum:' this kid is weird like his dad but his dad wasn't a workaholic'

Mum:" alright today I'm going to help you sense without the need for concentration"

Ren:" what do you mean mum?"

Mum:" you have to be conscious to active your sensory but what am I going teach you is how to automatically activate your sensory"

Oh wow, this training is going to be amazing this helps me know who going to attack me whenever I want like the 360 Byakugan.

Mum:" alright first I'm going to blindfold you and I don't want you to use sensory"

Ren:" how am I going to know you're attacking me"

Mum:" that's why I want you to automatically use your sensory when someone is attacking you and when you finish this training I'm sure no one will be able to kill you by surprise attacks"

Woah this is like observation haki from one piece being a sensor is so amazing.

Mum:" when you finish your training im going to take you clothes shopping"

Ren:" what's wrong with my clothes mum"

Mum: "you only have training clothes you don't have any outgoing clothes so shut up and doge!"

Bak

Ren:" owww"

This is hard and why am I getting the feeling that mum is enjoying it?

To be continued.

Authors note:

I change hanaHana'st name to hatake and I don't know if any hatake members are alive other than Kakashi. power stones and add to the reading list arigato for reading.